7 分範例

問題: Have you ever had a pet before?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, I had a dog when I was a child. My family loves animals, so we always had pets at home. I liked playing with my dog after school, and I still have some photos of him.
是的,我小時候有一隻狗。我的家人喜歡動物,所以我們家裡總是有寵物。放學後我喜歡和我的狗玩,我還保存著一些他的照片。
Yes, I used to have a dog when I was a child. Having a pet really taught me responsibility and how to care for another living being. My family has always loved animals, so we usually had pets at home. I have lots of fond memories of playing with my dog after school, and I still keep some photos of him.
是的,我小時候有養過一隻狗。養寵物真的教會了我責任感以及如何照顧另一個生命。我家人一直都很喜歡動物,所以我們通常家裡都有寵物。我有很多放學後和我的狗玩耍的美好回憶,並且我仍然保留著他的照片。
語法分析
1. 過去式和現在完成式:答案使用過去式(「used to have」、「taught me」、「had pets」、「played」)來描述過去的經歷,並使用現在完成式(「has always loved」)來表示從過去持續到現在的狀況。 2. 不定詞和動名詞結構:「to care for another living being」使用不定詞來解釋所學的內容,而「having a pet」使用動名詞作為句子的主語。 3. 複合句:答案使用「so」來連接子句,並用「and」來連接多個想法,使回應更加流暢和詳盡。
高分詞匯
  • taught me responsibility
    教會了我責任感
  • care for another living being
    照顧另一個生命
  • fond memories
    美好回憶
  • keep some photos of him
    保留一些他的照片

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I’ve never had a pet before. My parents didn’t allow pets because they thought it would be too messy. I sometimes help my friends take care of their pets, but I don’t have my own.
不,我以前從來沒有養過寵物。我的父母不允許養寵物,因為他們覺得會太亂。我有時會幫朋友照顧他們的寵物,但我沒有自己的寵物。
No, I’ve never had a pet of my own. My parents didn’t allow pets at home because of allergies and cleanliness concerns. I’ve always wanted a pet, and sometimes I take care of my friends’ pets when they travel, but I hope to have one in the future when my living situation changes.
不,我從來沒有自己的寵物。我的父母因為過敏和清潔方面的考量,不允許家裡養寵物。我一直很想養寵物,有時候朋友出門旅行時我會幫忙照顧他們的寵物,但我希望未來生活狀況改變後能有自己的寵物。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式:「I’ve never had a pet of my own」和「I’ve always wanted a pet」使用現在完成式來描述生活經驗和持續的願望,顯示出對時態用法的良好掌握。 2. 複雜句:答案使用像「because」和「when」這樣的連接詞來構造複雜句,增加了解釋的深度和清晰度。
高分詞匯
  • allergies and cleanliness concerns
    過敏和清潔問題
  • take care of my friends’ pets
    照顧我朋友的寵物
  • living situation changes
    居住情況變化