7 分範例

問題: What's your favourite animal? Why?

思路 1

Dog
考官答案
My favourite animal is the dog. Dogs are really friendly and loyal, and I grew up with a pet dog, so I have a lot of good memories. I like taking dogs for walks in the park and playing with them.
我最喜歡的動物是狗。狗真的很友善且忠誠,我從小就有一隻寵物狗,所以我有很多美好的回憶。我喜歡帶狗去公園散步並和牠們玩耍。
My favourite animal has to be the dog. I love how friendly and loyal they are, which makes them such great companions. I actually grew up with a pet dog, so I have many happy memories of playing with him and taking him for walks in the park. I also appreciate how dogs can be trained to help people with disabilities, which I think is amazing.
我最喜歡的動物一定是狗。我喜歡牠們的友善和忠誠,這使牠們成為很棒的夥伴。我其實是在有寵物狗的環境中長大的,所以我有很多與牠玩耍和帶牠去公園散步的快樂回憶。我也很欣賞狗可以被訓練來幫助殘障人士,我覺得這非常了不起。
語法分析
1. 使用關係子句:「which makes them such great companions」和「which I think is amazing」是關係子句,增加細節和解釋,顯示較高層次的句子複雜度。 2. 使用過去式和現在式:答案正確地在過去式(「I actually grew up」、「I have many happy memories」)和現在式(「I love」、「I appreciate」)之間切換,用於描述過去經驗和表達當前感受及普遍真理。
高分詞匯
  • friendly and loyal
    友善且忠誠
  • great companions
    很棒的夥伴
  • happy memories
    快樂的回憶
  • appreciate
    欣賞
  • trained to help people with disabilities
    接受過幫助殘障人士的訓練

思路 2

Cat
考官答案
I like cats the most. They are independent and don’t need much attention, which is good for me because I’m busy. I also think their purring is very relaxing.
我最喜歡貓。它們很獨立,不需要太多關注,這對我來說很好,因為我很忙。我也覺得它們的呼嚕聲非常令人放鬆。
My favourite animal is definitely the cat. I love how independent and playful they are, and their purring always helps me feel calm after a stressful day. Cats are also really easy to take care of, which suits my busy lifestyle perfectly. Plus, I enjoy watching funny cat videos online—they always make me laugh!
我最喜歡的動物絕對是貓。我喜歡牠們的獨立和好玩的性格,牠們的呼嚕聲總是在我壓力大的一天後讓我感到平靜。貓也非常容易照顧,這非常適合我忙碌的生活方式。而且,我喜歡觀看網上的有趣貓咪影片——牠們總是讓我笑出來!
語法分析
1. 形容詞的使用:答案使用了描述性的形容詞(「independent and playful」)來清楚表達貓的特質。 2. 關係子句:「which suits my busy lifestyle perfectly」是一個關係子句,為句子增添了細節和複雜性。 3. 現在簡單式:答案持續使用現在簡單式來描述普遍的事實和習慣,這對於此類問題來說是合適的。
高分詞匯
  • independent and playful
    獨立且充滿玩心
  • purring
    呼嚕聲
  • easy to take care of
    容易照顧
  • suits my busy lifestyle perfectly
    非常適合我忙碌的生活方式
  • funny cat videos online
    線上搞笑貓咪影片

思路 3

Panda
熊貓
考官答案
I think pandas are my favourite animal. They look really cute and special. I hope I can see a panda in real life one day.
我認為熊貓是我最喜歡的動物。牠們看起來真的很可愛且特別。我希望有一天能親眼見到熊貓。
I would say my favourite animal is the panda. They are unique and symbolize peace in Chinese culture, which I find meaningful. Pandas look incredibly cute and cuddly, and because they are so rare, they feel very special to me. They also remind me of the importance of wildlife conservation.
我會說我最喜歡的動物是熊貓。牠們獨特且象徵著中國文化中的和平,這讓我覺得很有意義。熊貓看起來非常可愛且令人想擁抱,由於牠們非常稀有,讓我覺得牠們很特別。牠們也提醒我野生動物保育的重要性。
語法分析
1. 情態動詞:「I would say」使用情態動詞來緩和陳述,使語氣聽起來更有禮貌和深思熟慮。 2. 關係子句:「which I find meaningful」和「because they are so rare, they feel very special to me」使用關係子句和副詞子句來增加細節和解釋,展現複雜的句型結構。 3. 現在簡單式:貫穿全文用來描述一般真理和觀點。
高分詞匯
  • unique
    獨特
  • symbolize peace
    象徵和平
  • meaningful
    有意義的
  • incredibly cute and cuddly
    非常可愛且令人想抱抱
  • rare
    罕見
  • special
    特殊
  • remind me of the importance of wildlife conservation
    提醒我野生動物保育的重要性

思路 4

Alternative Animals
另類動物
考官答案
Some people like birds because they are colorful and can sing. Others prefer fish because they are peaceful and easy to watch. Everyone has their own favourite animal for different reasons.
有些人喜歡鳥,因為它們色彩繽紛且會唱歌。另一些人則偏愛魚,因為它們平靜且容易觀察。每個人因為不同的原因都有自己喜愛的動物。
I know that some people prefer birds because of their beautiful colors and singing abilities, while others enjoy keeping fish since they are peaceful and relaxing to watch. There are also people who find reptiles like turtles fascinating because they live a long time and move slowly. I think everyone has different reasons for choosing their favourite animal, and it often depends on their personality and lifestyle.
我知道有些人喜歡鳥類是因為它們美麗的顏色和歌唱能力,而另一些人則喜歡養魚,因為魚類安靜且觀賞起來讓人放鬆。也有人覺得像烏龜這樣的爬行動物很有趣,因為它們壽命長且行動緩慢。我認為每個人選擇喜愛動物的原因都不同,這通常取決於他們的個性和生活方式。
語法分析
1. 使用比較結構:答案使用「some people prefer... while others enjoy...」來比較不同的偏好,展示了構造複雜句子的能力。 2. 使用關係子句:像「because of their beautiful colors and singing abilities」和「because they live a long time and move slowly」這樣的片語提供了原因並增加細節,展示了從屬子句的使用。 3. 概括:使用「everyone has different reasons」和「it often depends on...」顯示了概括和總結觀點的能力。
高分詞匯
  • beautiful colors
    美麗的顏色
  • singing abilities
    唱歌能力
  • peaceful and relaxing to watch
    觀看起來平和且令人放鬆
  • fascinating
    迷人
  • live a long time
    長壽
  • move slowly
    動作緩慢
  • personality and lifestyle
    個性與生活方式