7 分範例

問題: Have you ever lost your keys?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, I have lost my keys before. It happened when I was rushing out of the house one morning. I couldn’t get back in and had to wait for my family to come home. It was really stressful, so now I always check my bag before leaving.
是的,我以前丟過鑰匙。那是我某個早晨匆忙出門時發生的。我無法重新進屋,只能等家人回來。當時真的很緊張,所以現在我出門前總會檢查包包。
Yes, I have lost my keys once when I was in a hurry to leave the house. It was quite a stressful experience because I couldn’t get back in until my family returned, and I even considered calling a locksmith. Since then, I’ve become much more careful and always double-check that I have my keys before going out.
是的,我曾經因為匆忙離開家而丟過鑰匙。這是一段相當有壓力的經歷,因為我在家人回來之前無法進屋,甚至考慮過叫鎖匠。從那以後,我變得更加小心,出門前總會反覆確認自己帶了鑰匙。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式:"I have lost my keys once" 使用現在完成式來描述與現在相關的過去經驗。 2. 過去進行式:"when I was in a hurry to leave the house" 使用過去進行式來設定事件的背景。 3. "since then" 的用法:"Since then, I’ve become much more careful" 正確使用現在完成式來描述從過去開始並持續到現在的變化。 4. 不定詞的用法:"considered calling a locksmith" 在 "considered" 後使用動名詞形式,這在語法上是正確的。
高分詞匯
  • stressful experience
    有壓力的經歷
  • considered calling a locksmith
    考慮過叫鎖匠
  • double-check
    雙重檢查

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I haven’t lost my keys before. I’m usually very careful and always put them in the same place at home. I also use a big keychain so it’s easy to find them in my bag.
不,我以前沒有丟過鑰匙。我通常非常小心,並且總是把它們放在家裡的同一個地方。我也使用一個大的鑰匙圈,這樣在包包裡就很容易找到它們。
No, I’ve never lost my keys because I’m quite careful with them. I have a special spot at home where I always leave them, and I use a noticeable keychain to make sure I can find them easily in my bag. I’ve seen some of my friends lose their keys often, so I try to learn from their mistakes and stay organized.
不,我從來沒有丟過鑰匙,因為我對它們很小心。我在家裡有一個特別的位置,總是把鑰匙放在那裡,並且我使用一個顯眼的鑰匙圈,確保我能輕鬆在包包裡找到它們。我看到一些朋友經常丟鑰匙,所以我試著從他們的錯誤中學習並保持有條理。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式:「I’ve never lost my keys」正確地使用現在完成式來談論迄今為止的生命經驗。 2. 關係子句的使用:「where I always leave them」是一個限定性關係子句,為「special spot」添加細節。 3. 不定詞表示目的的用法:「to make sure I can find them easily」和「to learn from their mistakes」兩者都使用不定詞來表達目的。
高分詞匯
  • careful with them
    小心他們
  • special spot
    特別的地方
  • noticeable keychain
    顯眼的鑰匙圈
  • learn from their mistakes
    從他們的錯誤中學習
  • stay organized
    保持有條理