7 分範例

問題: Where did you go for a walk lately?

思路 1

Local Park
本地公園
考官答案
I went for a walk in the local park last weekend. It’s close to my house, so I go there often. There are many trees and flowers, and I like to watch people jogging and kids playing.
我上週末去當地公園散步。它離我家很近,所以我經常去那裡。那裡有許多樹木和花朵,我喜歡觀看慢跑的人和玩耍的孩子們。
Last weekend, I took a walk in the nearby park. It’s a really peaceful place, full of trees and flowers, and I always enjoy watching people jogging or children playing there. Since it’s so close to my home, it’s very convenient for me to visit whenever I want to relax.
上週末,我在附近的公園散步。那是一個非常寧靜的地方,滿是樹木和花朵,我總是喜歡看人們慢跑或孩子們在那裡玩耍。由於它離我家很近,我可以隨時去那裡放鬆,非常方便。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單式:「Last weekend, I took a walk...」正確地使用過去簡單式來描述過去已完成的動作。 2. 現在簡單式用於習慣性動作:「I always enjoy watching...」使用現在簡單式來表達習慣性或重複發生的動作。 3. 關係子句:「Since it’s so close to my home, it’s very convenient for me to visit whenever I want to relax.」使用 "whenever" 引入時間子句,顯示句子結構的靈活性。
高分詞匯
  • peaceful place
    寧靜的地方
  • watching people jogging or children playing
    觀看人們慢跑或孩子們玩耍
  • convenient
    方便
  • relax
    放鬆

思路 2

City Streets
城市街道
考官答案
I walked around the city center a few days ago. I wanted to do some shopping and look at the shop windows. Sometimes I see street performers, which is fun.
幾天前我在市中心走了走。我想去購物看看櫥窗。有時候我會看到街頭表演者,這很有趣。
Recently, I went for a walk around the city center to do some shopping. I really enjoy looking at the shop windows and watching street performers. It’s also a great way to relax and sometimes I even bump into friends by chance.
最近,我去市中心散步並購物。我非常喜歡看店面櫥窗和觀看街頭表演者。這也是放鬆的好方法,有時我甚至會偶然遇到朋友。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單式的使用:「I went for a walk」和「I really enjoy」展示了對近期事件使用過去簡單式,以及對一般偏好使用現在簡單式的正確用法。 2. 不定詞與動名詞的使用:「to do some shopping」(目的不定詞)以及「looking at the shop windows」、「watching street performers」(作為受詞的動名詞)展示了多種語法結構。 3. 連接詞的使用:「and」被有效地用來連接想法,增加回答的流暢度。
高分詞匯
  • city center
    市中心
  • looking at the shop windows
    看著店鋪的櫥窗
  • watching street performers
    觀看街頭表演者
  • relax
    放鬆
  • bump into friends by chance
    偶然遇到朋友

思路 3

Riverside or Nature Trail
河畔或自然步道
考官答案
I walked along the river near my town not long ago. It’s very quiet and there are not many people. I like listening to the water and birds there.
我不久前沿著我鎮附近的河邊散步。那裡非常安靜,人也不多。我喜歡聽那裡的水聲和鳥鳴。
Not long ago, I went for a walk along the river near my town. The scenery there is beautiful and it’s much less crowded than other places. I love listening to the sound of the water and birds, which really helps me clear my mind after a busy day.
不久前,我沿著我鎮附近的河邊散步。那裡的風景很美,而且比其他地方少了很多人。我喜歡聽水聲和鳥鳴,這真的幫助我在忙碌一天後清理思緒。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單時態:「I went for a walk」正確使用過去簡單時態來描述最近的動作。 2. 關係子句:「which really helps me clear my mind after a busy day」使用關係子句來補充說明這個經歷如何使說話者受益。 3. 比較結構:「much less crowded than other places」使用比較結構將河邊區域與其他地方進行比較。
高分詞匯
  • along the river near my town
    沿著我鎮附近的河流
  • beautiful
    美麗
  • less crowded
    人較少
  • sound of the water and birds
    水聲與鳥鳴
  • clear my mind
    清空我的心靈

思路 4

University or School Campus
大學或學校校園
考官答案
I walked around my university campus after class last week. There are many green spaces, and sometimes I meet my classmates and talk while walking.
我上週下課後在大學校園裡走來走去。那裡有很多綠地,有時我會遇到同學,一邊走一邊聊天。
Last week, I took a walk around my university campus after class. It’s a lovely place with lots of green spaces, and I often run into classmates and have a chat while walking. It’s a great way to get some fresh air and take a break from studying.
上週課後,我在大學校園裡散步。那是一個有很多綠地的可愛地方,我經常遇到同學,邊走邊聊天。這是呼吸新鮮空氣和從學習中休息的好方法。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單式:答案使用了過去簡單式(「I took a walk」、「I often run into」)來描述近期的事件,這對於關於最近活動的問題而言是合適的。 2. 複合句:答案有效地使用了「and」來連接想法,使回應更加流暢和詳盡。 3. 現在簡單式表示習慣:「I often run into classmates and have a chat」使用現在簡單式來描述在散步時發生的習慣性行為。
高分詞匯
  • lovely place
    可愛的地方
  • green spaces
    綠地
  • run into classmates
    遇到同學
  • have a chat
    聊天
  • get some fresh air
    呼吸一些新鮮空氣
  • take a break from studying
    休息一下,不要讀書了