7 分範例

問題: Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, I often went for walks when I was a child. My family liked to go outside after dinner, and there were some parks near my house. I usually walked with my parents or grandparents, and sometimes we met my friends there to play.
是的,我小時候經常去散步。我的家人喜歡晚餐後外出,我家附近有一些公園。我通常會和父母或祖父母一起散步,有時我們會在那裡遇見我的朋友們一起玩。
Yes, I used to go for walks almost every evening with my family when I was a child. We were lucky to have several parks and open spaces near our home, so it was easy to spend time outdoors. Walking was not only a way to play with friends and explore nature, but also a family tradition that I really enjoyed, especially the walks after dinner with my grandparents.
是的,我小時候幾乎每個傍晚都會和家人一起散步。我們很幸運家附近有幾個公園和開放空間,所以很容易在戶外度過時間。散步不僅是和朋友玩耍和探索大自然的一種方式,還是一個我非常喜歡的家庭傳統,特別是晚飯後和祖父母一起散步。
語法分析
1. 過去習慣:「used to go for walks」這個短語正確表達了過去的習慣性行為,展示了應試者描述過去例行公事的能力。 2. 複雜句型:答案使用了「not only... but also...」來連接兩個相關的想法,展示了運用較高階句型以強調和增加句子多樣性的能力。 3. 過去簡單時態:「We were lucky」、「it was easy」、「I really enjoyed」—這些動詞正確地使用過去簡單時態來描述過去的經歷。
高分詞匯
  • used to go for walks
    過去常去散步
  • several parks and open spaces
    幾個公園和開放空間
  • spend time outdoors
    花時間在戶外
  • play with friends
    與朋友一起玩
  • explore nature
    探索大自然
  • family tradition
    家族傳統

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I didn’t go outside for walks very often when I was young. I had a lot of homework and extra classes, so I was usually too busy. Also, I liked staying inside to read or play video games.
不,年輕時我並不常外出散步。我有很多家庭作業和額外課程,所以通常都很忙。此外,我喜歡待在室內閱讀或玩電子遊戲。
No, I didn’t often go outside for walks as a child. I was usually busy with homework and after-school classes, and my parents were quite strict about safety because our neighborhood wasn’t very safe. Besides, I preferred staying indoors to read books or play video games, so I didn’t really develop the habit of walking outside.
不,我小時候並不常出去散步。我通常忙於做作業和補習班,而且我的父母對安全非常嚴格,因為我們的社區不太安全。此外,我比較喜歡待在室內看書或玩電子遊戲,所以我並沒有養成在外面散步的習慣。
語法分析
1. 過去式一致性:答案持續使用過去簡單式(「didn’t often go」、「was usually busy」、「preferred」、「didn’t really develop」)來描述童年習慣和情況,這對談論過去的事情是適當的。 2. 複雜句子:回答中使用了連接詞如「and」、「because」和「so」來連接想法並提供原因,顯示出能夠構造更複雜且連貫的句子能力。
高分詞匯
  • busy with homework and after-school classes
    忙於做家庭作業和課後補習班
  • strict about safety
    對安全要求嚴格
  • besides
    除了
  • staying indoors
    待在室內
  • develop the habit
    養成習慣