7 分範例

問題: Are there any differences between what you do in the morning now and what you did in the past?

思路 1

Yes, There Are Differences
是的,確實存在差異
考官答案
Yes, there are some differences. When I was younger, I used to sleep in and take my time in the morning. Now, I have to get up early to get ready for work, so my mornings are much busier and I don’t have as much time to relax.
是的,確實有一些差異。當我年輕的時候,我習慣賴床,早晨從容不迫。現在,我必須早起準備上班,所以我的早晨變得更加忙碌,也沒那麼多時間放鬆。
Yes, my morning routine has changed quite a lot over the years. In the past, I could sleep in and enjoy a relaxed breakfast with my family, but now I have more responsibilities, like preparing for work or university. My mornings are much more rushed, and I often find myself checking my phone or emails as soon as I wake up, which is something I never used to do.
是的,我的早晨例行公事這些年來改變了很多。過去,我可以睡懶覺,和家人一起享受輕鬆的早餐,但現在我有更多的責任,比如準備工作或大學課程。我的早晨變得更加匆忙,我經常發現自己一醒來就查看手機或電子郵件,這是我以前從未做過的事。
語法分析
1. 過去式和現在式的使用:答案正確地對比了過去(「could sleep in」、「enjoy a relaxed breakfast」)和現在(「have more responsibilities」、「are much more rushed」、「find myself checking my phone」),顯示出對時態用法的清晰理解,以進行比較。 2. 情態動詞的使用:「could sleep in」使用了情態動詞「could」來表達過去的能力或可能性。 3. 關係子句的使用:「which is something I never used to do」是一個關係子句,為前述陳述添加細節,提升了句子的複雜度。
高分詞匯
  • sleep in
    賴床
  • relaxed breakfast
    輕鬆的早餐
  • responsibilities
    職責
  • rushed
    匆忙的
  • checking my phone or emails as soon as I wake up
    醒來後馬上查看我的手機或電子郵件
  • never used to do
    從未做過

思路 2

No, Not Much Has Changed
不,沒什麼改變
考官答案
No, not much has changed for me. I still start my day with a cup of tea and some light exercise, just like I did before. I like to keep my mornings calm and organized.
不,對我來說並沒有太大改變。我仍然像以前一樣,以一杯茶和一些輕度運動開始我的一天。我喜歡保持早晨的平靜和有序。
Actually, my morning routine has stayed mostly the same over the years. I’ve always valued a calm and organized start to the day, so I still begin with a cup of tea and a bit of stretching. Even though my schedule has changed, my basic habits haven’t really been affected.
其實,多年來我的早晨例行公事大致保持不變。我一直重視一天的平靜有序開始,所以我仍然會先喝杯茶,然後做些伸展運動。即使我的時間表有所變化,但我的基本習慣並未受到影響。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式:「my morning routine has stayed mostly the same」使用現在完成式來描述從過去開始並持續到現在的情況。 2. 與「Even though」的對比:「Even though my schedule has changed, my basic habits haven’t really been affected.」這個複合句使用「even though」引出對比,展示了使用從屬連接詞來形成更進階句型的能力。
高分詞匯
  • stayed mostly the same
    大致保持不變
  • valued a calm and organized start to the day
    重視一天平靜有序的開始
  • basic habits haven’t really been affected
    基本習慣並未真正受到影響