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問題: Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

思路 1

Yes
是
考官答案
Yes, I have liked drawing since I was a child. My parents sent me to art classes when I was young, and I still draw pictures in my free time. Drawing helps me relax, and sometimes I give my drawings to my friends as gifts.
是的，我從小就喜歡畫畫。我的父母在我年輕時送我去上美術課，我仍然會在空閒時間畫畫。畫畫幫助我放鬆，有時我會把我的畫作送給朋友作為禮物。
Yes, I’ve loved drawing ever since I was a child. My parents encouraged me to take art classes when I was young, and drawing has always helped me relax and express my feelings. I still draw in my free time, and sometimes I even give my artwork as gifts to friends. Over the years, I’ve improved a lot and have even participated in school art competitions.
是的，我從小就喜歡畫畫。我的父母在我年輕時鼓勵我上美術課，而畫畫一直幫助我放鬆並表達我的感受。我仍然會在空閒時間畫畫，有時甚至會把我的作品當作禮物送給朋友。多年來，我進步了很多，甚至參加過學校的美術比賽。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式："I’ve loved drawing ever since I was a child" 和 "I’ve improved a lot" 展示了使用現在完成式來描述從過去開始並持續到現在的動作或狀態。 2. 過去簡單式："My parents encouraged me to take art classes when I was young" 使用過去簡單式來描述過去已完成的動作。 3. 現在簡單式："drawing has always helped me relax and express my feelings" 和 "I still draw in my free time" 使用現在簡單式來描述習慣和普遍真理。 4. 副詞片語的使用："ever since I was a child," "in my free time," 和 "over the years" 為句子增添細節和時間參照。
高分詞匯
  • loved drawing ever since I was a child
    我從小就喜歡畫畫
  • encouraged me to take art classes
    鼓勵我參加藝術課程
  • helped me relax and express my feelings
    幫助我放鬆並表達我的感受
  • give my artwork as gifts
    將我的藝術作品作為禮物贈送
  • improved a lot
    有很大改善
  • participated in school art competitions
    參加學校藝術比賽

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I don’t have a hobby from childhood. When I was a kid, I liked collecting stamps, but now I don’t do that anymore. My hobbies have changed, and now I prefer playing sports or listening to music.
不，我從小沒有特別的興趣。當我還是小孩的時候，我喜歡集郵，但現在我已經不做那個了。我的興趣改變了，現在我更喜歡運動或聽音樂。
No, I don’t have a hobby that I’ve kept since childhood. My interests have changed as I’ve grown older. For example, I used to enjoy collecting stamps and toys when I was a child, but now I’m more interested in playing sports and listening to music. I think it’s natural for people’s hobbies to change as they get older, and I like to try new things rather than stick to just one hobby for a long time.
不，我從小到大沒有一直保持的愛好。隨著年齡的增長，我的興趣也有所改變。例如，我小時候喜歡收集郵票和玩具，但現在我更喜歡運動和聽音樂。我認為隨著年齡增長，人的愛好改變是很自然的，我喜歡嘗試新事物，而不是長時間只專注於一種愛好。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式：「I don’t have a hobby that I’ve kept since childhood.」現在完成式（"I’ve kept"）用來描述一個從過去開始並持續到現在的動作，展現了良好的時態掌握。 2. 過去簡單式與現在簡單式：答案流暢地在過去簡單式（"I used to enjoy...when I was a child"）和現在簡單式（"now I’m more interested..."）之間切換，清楚地展現時間上的變化。 3. 不定詞與動名詞的使用："to try new things"（不定詞）和 "playing sports and listening to music"（動名詞）展現了句型結構的靈活運用。 4. 比較結構："rather than stick to just one hobby for a long time" 使用比較短語來表達偏好。
高分詞匯
  • kept since childhood
    從小保留的
  • my interests have changed
    我的興趣已經改變了
  • used to enjoy
    曾經喜歡
  • collecting stamps and toys
    蒐集郵票和玩具
  • more interested in
    更感興趣於
  • natural for people’s hobbies to change
    人們的興趣隨著時間改變是很自然的事情
  • try new things
    嘗試新事物
  • stick to just one hobby
    專注於一項興趣
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