7 分範例

問題: Do you have any hobbies?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, I have some hobbies. I like reading books, playing sports, and listening to music. For example, I play basketball with my friends every weekend. Hobbies help me relax after a busy day at school.
是的,我有一些嗜好。我喜歡閱讀書籍、運動和聽音樂。例如,我每個週末都和朋友一起打籃球。嗜好幫助我在繁忙的學校生活後放鬆身心。
Yes, I have several hobbies, such as reading, playing sports, and listening to music. For instance, I really enjoy playing basketball with my friends every weekend. I find that having hobbies helps me relax after a busy day at work, and it also gives me the chance to meet new people and learn new skills. I honestly believe everyone should have at least one hobby to keep life interesting.
是的,我有幾個愛好,例如閱讀、運動和聽音樂。例如,我很喜歡每個週末和朋友一起打籃球。我發現擁有愛好能幫助我在忙碌的工作一天後放鬆,也給我機會認識新朋友和學習新技能。我真心相信每個人都應該至少有一個愛好,讓生活保持有趣。
語法分析
1. 使用範例:「For instance」這個短語用來引入具體的例子,有助於闡明並支持一般陳述。 2. 複合句:答案使用了帶有連詞如「and」和「that」的複合句來連接想法,顯示了較高層次的語法多樣性。 3. 情態動詞:「should」用來表達建議或推薦,適合用於分享意見。
高分詞匯
  • several hobbies
    幾個愛好
  • for instance
    例如
  • helps me relax
    幫助我放鬆
  • gives me the chance
    給我機會
  • meet new people
    結識新朋友
  • learn new skills
    學習新技能
  • honestly believe
    老實說相信
  • keep life interesting
    保持生活有趣

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I don’t really have any hobbies right now because I’m too busy with my studies. I used to like drawing, but now I don’t have much time for it. Maybe in the future, I will start a hobby again.
不,我現在真的沒有什麼興趣愛好,因為我太忙於學業了。我以前喜歡畫畫,但現在沒有太多時間做這個。也許將來我會再開始一個興趣愛好。
At the moment, I don’t really have any hobbies because I’m too busy with my studies. In the past, I used to enjoy drawing, but now I hardly ever do it. Sometimes I wish I had more free time to develop a hobby, and maybe in the future, when my schedule is less hectic, I’ll pick up a hobby again.
目前,我沒有任何嗜好,因為我忙於學業。過去,我喜歡畫畫,但現在幾乎不畫了。有時我希望有更多空閒時間來培養一個嗜好,也許將來當我的時間較不那麼緊湊時,我會再次開始一個嗜好。
語法分析
1. 時間表達的使用:答案使用了清晰的時間表達,如「at the moment」、「in the past」和「in the future」,展示了隨時間變化的情況,表現出良好的時態掌握和連貫性。 2. 情態動詞和條件句的使用:「I wish I had more free time」使用了虛擬語氣來表達假設情況,而「maybe in the future, when my schedule is less hectic, I’ll pick up a hobby again」則使用了條件句結構來談論未來的可能性。
高分詞匯
  • used to enjoy
    曾經喜歡
  • hardly ever
    幾乎從不
  • develop a hobby
    培養一個嗜好
  • less hectic
    較不忙碌
  • pick up a hobby again
    重新拾起一項興趣