7 分範例
話題: Describe a long journey you had and would like to take again
範例
A memorable road trip When/where you went I'm going to talk about a long journey I took last summer, which was a road trip across the United States. We started in New York City and drove all the way to Los Angeles. It was an incredible experience that spanned over two weeks. Who you had the journey with I embarked on this adventure with three of my closest friends from university. We had been planning this trip for months, and it was a great opportunity for us to reconnect and spend quality time together after graduation. We rented a spacious van, which allowed us to travel comfortably and carry all our camping gear. Why you had the journey The primary reason for this journey was to celebrate our graduation and take a break before diving into the professional world. We wanted to explore the diverse landscapes and cultures of the United States, and a road trip seemed like the perfect way to do it. We were all eager to see iconic landmarks like the Grand Canyon, Yellowstone National Park, and the vibrant city life of Las Vegas. And explain why you would like to have it again I would love to take this journey again because it was an unforgettable experience filled with adventure, laughter, and bonding. The freedom of the open road, the breathtaking scenery, and the spontaneous detours made every day exciting. We camped under the stars, hiked through national parks, and met fascinating people along the way. It was a journey of self-discovery and friendship, and I cherish the memories we created. Repeating this trip would allow me to relive those moments and perhaps explore new places we missed the first time. Plus, with the benefit of hindsight, I believe we could plan even better routes and activities, making the experience even more enriching.
難忘的公路旅行 何時何地出發 我將談談去年夏天我進行的一次長途旅行,那是一場橫跨美國的公路旅行。我們從紐約市出發,一路開車到洛杉磯。這是一段持續超過兩週的難以置信的經歷。 同行的人 我和大學時期最親密的三位朋友一起踏上這次冒險。我們計劃這趟旅行已經好幾個月了,這是我們畢業後重新聯繫並共度美好時光的絕佳機會。我們租了一輛寬敞的廂型車,這讓我們能夠舒適地旅行,並且攜帶所有露營裝備。 旅行的原因 這次旅行的主要目的是為了慶祝畢業,並在步入職場前休息一段時間。我們想探索美國多元化的風景和文化,而公路旅行似乎是最佳的方式。我們都非常期待看到像大峽谷、黃石國家公園以及充滿活力的拉斯維加斯市區等標誌性景點。 為何願意再次旅行 我很想再次進行這段旅程,因為那是一段充滿冒險、歡笑和情誼的難忘經歷。開放道路的自由、令人屏息的風景和即興的繞路使每一天都充滿刺激。我們在星空下露營,徒步穿越國家公園,並沿途遇見了許多有趣的人。這是一段自我發現與友情的旅程,我珍惜我們創造的回憶。重複這趟旅行會讓我重溫那些時刻,或許還能探索第一次錯過的新地方。此外,經過反思,我相信我們能規劃出更好的路線和活動,讓這次經歷更加豐富。
語法分析
答案展示了各種時態的有效運用,例如用過去簡單時態描述旅程("I took last summer"),用過去進行時描述旅途中持續進行的動作("We were all eager to see"),以及用條件式表達未來的願望("I would love to take this journey again")。這種多樣性有助於傳達與旅程相關的時間線和情感。使用帶有連詞和關係子句的複合句增加了深度和細節,例如 "We started in New York City and drove all the way to Los Angeles" 以及 "which allowed us to travel comfortably and carry all our camping gear"。答案還包括描述性語言和修飾語,增強了敘述的生動性,如 "breathtaking scenery" 和 "spontaneous detours"。
高分詞匯
  • memorable road trip
    難忘的公路旅行
  • embarked on this adventure
    展開這次冒險旅程
  • spacious van
    寬敞的廂型車
  • camping gear
    露營裝備
  • diverse landscapes
    多樣化的風景
  • iconic landmarks
    標誌性地標
  • unforgettable experience
    難忘的經歷
  • breathtaking scenery
    令人驚嘆的風景
  • spontaneous detours
    即興繞道
  • journey of self-discovery
    自我探索之旅
  • cherish the memories
    珍惜回憶
  • benefit of hindsight
    事後諸葛亮的好處
  • enriching experience
    充實的經驗