7 分範例

問題: What was your dream job when you were young?

思路 1

Doctor
醫生
考官答案
When I was young, I wanted to be a doctor. I thought it would be great to help people feel better. Plus, doctors are respected, and I liked that idea. I also enjoyed playing with toy medical kits.
當我年輕的時候,我想成為一名醫生。我覺得幫助別人感覺更好會很棒。此外,醫生受到尊重,我喜歡這個想法。我也喜歡玩玩具醫療套件。
As a child, my dream job was to become a doctor. I was inspired by a family member who is a doctor, and I wanted to help people and make them feel better. Doctors are highly respected in society, and I found that appealing. I even used to play with toy medical kits and enjoyed watching medical dramas on TV.
小時候,我夢想的工作是成為一名醫生。我受到家中一位醫生親戚的啟發,想幫助別人讓他們感覺好些。醫生在社會上備受尊重,這點令我很有吸引力。我甚至曾經玩醫療玩具套裝,並喜歡觀看醫療劇。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單時態:答案使用過去簡單時態(「was」、「wanted」、「found」、「used to play」、「enjoyed」)來描述過去的習慣和願望,這對於討論童年夢想是適當的。 2. 連接詞的使用:「and」的使用有效地連接了相關的觀點,使回答連貫且易於理解。
高分詞匯
  • inspired by
    靈感來自于
  • make them feel better
    讓他們感覺更好
  • highly respected
    備受尊敬的
  • appealing
    吸引人

思路 2

Teacher
教師
考官答案
I wanted to be a teacher when I was young. I admired my teachers and thought it would be fun to teach students. I liked explaining things to my friends and playing "school" with my siblings.
我年輕時想成為一名老師。我崇拜我的老師,覺得教學生會很有趣。我喜歡向朋友解釋事情,並和兄弟姐妹玩「學校」遊戲。
When I was young, I dreamed of becoming a teacher. I admired my teachers and wanted to be like them. I enjoyed explaining things to my friends and liked the idea of having a classroom and teaching students. I was inspired by a teacher who made learning fun, and I often played "school" with my siblings and friends.
當我年輕的時候,我夢想成為一名老師。我欽佩我的老師,並希望成為像他們一樣的人。我喜歡向朋友解釋事情,也喜歡擁有一個教室並教學生的想法。我受到一位讓學習變得有趣的老師啟發,並且經常與兄弟姐妹和朋友一起玩「學校」的遊戲。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單時態:使用過去簡單時態("dreamed," "admired," "enjoyed," "liked," "was inspired")有效地描述了過去的願望和行為,這對於討論兒時的志向非常合適。 2. 不定詞的使用:片語 "wanted to be like them" 使用了不定詞 "to be" 來表達願望或意圖,顯示出能夠運用不同的動詞形式來傳達意義。
高分詞匯
  • dreamed of becoming
    夢想成為
  • admired
    欽佩
  • explaining things
    解釋事情
  • inspired by
    靈感來自于

思路 3

Astronaut
宇航員
考官答案
I dreamed of being an astronaut. I was fascinated by space and loved watching documentaries about it. I thought it would be amazing to explore other planets and experience zero gravity.
我夢想成為一名太空人。我對太空充滿了興趣,喜歡觀看關於太空的紀錄片。我覺得探索其他星球和體驗零重力會非常精彩。
As a child, I dreamed of becoming an astronaut. I was fascinated by space and the idea of exploring other planets. I loved watching space documentaries and reading about astronauts. The thought of experiencing zero gravity was thrilling, and I used to build model rockets and dream of flying them. I was inspired by famous astronauts like Neil Armstrong.
小時候,我夢想成為一名宇航員。我對太空和探索其他行星的想法充滿了興趣。我喜歡觀看太空紀錄片和閱讀關於宇航員的書籍。體驗無重力的想法讓我感到興奮,我曾經製作模型火箭,並夢想著駕駛它們。我受到像尼爾·阿姆斯壯這樣的著名宇航員的啟發。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單時態:答案有效地使用過去簡單時態("dreamed," "was fascinated," "loved," "used to build")來描述過去的願望和行動,這對於討論童年夢想是恰當的。 2. 不定詞的使用:"to build" 和 "to fly" 的使用展示了運用不定詞表達目的或意圖的能力。
高分詞匯
  • fascinated by
    著迷於
  • exploring other planets
    探索其他行星
  • space documentaries
    太空紀錄片
  • zero gravity
    零重力
  • thrilling
    令人興奮
  • model rockets
    模型火箭
  • inspired by
    靈感來自于

思路 4

Artist
藝術家
考官答案
I wanted to be an artist. I loved drawing and painting, and I spent a lot of time sketching. I was inspired by famous artists and enjoyed visiting art galleries with my family.
我想成為一名藝術家。我喜歡繪畫和畫畫,花了很多時間素描。我受到著名藝術家的啟發,並且喜歡和家人一起參觀藝術畫廊。
When I was young, I dreamed of becoming an artist. I loved drawing and painting from a young age and wanted to create beautiful things and express myself through art. I was inspired by famous artists and their works, and I used to spend hours sketching and coloring. Visiting art galleries and museums with my family was something I truly enjoyed.
當我年輕的時候,我夢想成為一名藝術家。我從小就喜歡畫畫和繪畫,想通過藝術創造美麗的事物並表達自己。我受到著名藝術家及其作品的啟發,常常花好幾個小時素描和上色。與家人一起參觀藝術畫廊和博物館是我非常喜歡的事情。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單式:過去簡單式("dreamed," "loved," "wanted," "was inspired," "used to spend," "enjoyed")的使用有效地傳達了過去的習慣和願望,展現了如何描述過去經歷的清晰理解。 2. 目的不定詞: "wanted to create beautiful things and express myself through art" 使用不定詞形式來表達目的,說明了成為藝術家的願望背後的原因。
高分詞匯
  • dreamed of becoming
    夢想成為
  • create beautiful things
    創造美麗的事物
  • express myself through art
    通過藝術表達自己
  • inspired by famous artists
    受著名藝術家啟發
  • sketching and coloring
    素描與上色
  • truly enjoyed
    真正享受