7 分範例
話題: Describe the time when you first talked in a foreign language
範例
First conversation in a foreign language Where you were I'm going to talk about the first time I spoke in a foreign language, which was during a trip to Paris, France. I was in a small café near the Eiffel Tower, a place bustling with tourists and locals alike. Who you were with I was with my friend, Sarah, who had been studying French for a couple of years. She was much more confident in the language than I was, but she encouraged me to try speaking it as well. We were sitting at a small table, sipping coffee and enjoying the ambiance of the city. What you talked about The conversation was with the waiter who came to take our order. I remember feeling quite nervous, but I decided to give it a shot. I asked him, in my best French, for a croissant and a cup of tea. He smiled and responded in French, asking if I wanted anything else. I managed to understand him and replied, "Non, merci." It was a simple exchange, but it felt monumental to me at the time. Explain how you felt about it I felt a mix of emotions after that brief conversation. Initially, I was quite anxious, worried that I might mispronounce words or not understand what was being said. However, once the interaction was over, I felt a sense of accomplishment and relief. It was empowering to realize that I could communicate, even at a basic level, in a language that was not my own. This experience boosted my confidence and motivated me to continue learning and practicing French. It was a small step, but it opened up a whole new world of possibilities for me, making me eager to explore more languages and cultures in the future.
第一次用外語交談 你在哪裡 我要說的是我第一次用外語交談的經驗,那是在法國巴黎旅行時。我當時在埃菲爾鐵塔附近一家小咖啡館,這裡遊客和當地人都非常多。 你和誰在一起 我和我的朋友莎拉在一起,她學法語已經有幾年了。她的語言能力比我自信得多,但她鼓勵我也嘗試說法語。我們坐在一張小桌子旁,喝著咖啡,享受著城市的氛圍。 你們談了什麼 這次對話是和來點菜的服務生。當時我記得自己非常緊張,但決定試一試。我用我最好的法語點了一個可頌和一杯茶。他微笑著用法語回答我,問我還需要什麼。我努力聽懂了他的話,回答說:「Non, merci。」這是一個簡單的對話,但當時對我來說意義重大。 說說你對這次經歷的感受 那段短暫的對話後,我心中充滿了複雜的情緒。剛開始時,我很焦慮,擔心會發錯音或聽不懂別人的話。不過,當互動結束後,我感到一種成就感和鬆了一口氣的感覺。能夠用一門非母語的語言進行基本交流,這讓我感到很有力量。這次經歷提升了我的自信,也激勵我繼續學習和練習法語。這雖然是小小的一步,卻為我打開了全新的可能性之門,讓我渴望未來能探索更多語言和文化。
語法分析
答案使用了多種句型結構,包括簡單句、複合句和複雜句,這有助於回應的流暢性和連貫性。例如,“I was with my friend, Sarah, who had been studying French for a couple of years”是一個複雜句,提供了關於Sarah的額外資訊。使用過去式的用法一致且適合敘述過去的事件,如“I remember feeling quite nervous”和“I felt a mix of emotions after that brief conversation”。答案還有效地使用直接引語來呈現對話,例如“Non, merci”,這增添了敘述的真實感。
高分詞匯
  • bustling
    繁忙的
  • confident
    自信
  • ambiance
    氛圍
  • give it a shot
    試一試
  • monumental
    劃時代的
  • mispronounce
    誤讀
  • accomplishment
    成就
  • empowering
    賦能
  • boosted my confidence
    提升了我的自信心
  • eager to explore
    渴望探索