7 分範例
話題: Describe a time when you broke something
範例
An accidental mishap What it was I'm going to talk about a time when I accidentally broke my friend's favorite vase. It was a beautiful, antique porcelain vase that had been passed down through her family for generations. When/where that happened This unfortunate incident happened about a year ago at my friend's house. We were having a small get-together to celebrate her birthday, and she had invited a few close friends over for dinner. How you broke it The accident occurred when I was helping to set the table for dinner. I was carrying a tray of glasses to the dining room when I tripped over the edge of a rug. In an attempt to regain my balance, I inadvertently swung my arm and knocked the vase off the side table. It fell to the floor and shattered into countless pieces. I was horrified and immediately felt a wave of guilt wash over me. And explain what you did after that After the initial shock, I quickly apologized to my friend and offered to replace the vase. She was understandably upset but was gracious enough to assure me that it was an accident and that she didn't hold it against me. I insisted on making amends, so the next day, I went to an antique shop and found a similar vase that I thought she would like. I also wrote her a heartfelt note expressing my regret and appreciation for her understanding. When I gave her the new vase, she was touched by the gesture and assured me that our friendship was far more valuable than any object. This experience taught me the importance of being careful and the value of true friendship, as my friend was incredibly forgiving and understanding despite the mishap.
一次意外的事故 事情經過 我要講述一次我不小心打破了我朋友最喜愛的花瓶的經歷。那是一個美麗的古董瓷花瓶,已經在她家族中傳承了好幾代。 事發時間與地點 這次不幸的事件發生在大約一年前,地點是在我朋友的家裡。我們正在舉辦一個小型聚會,慶祝她的生日,她邀請了幾位親密的朋友來家裡吃晚餐。 你是如何打破它的 事故發生在我幫忙擺餐桌時。我正端著一托盤的杯子走向餐廳時,不小心絆到了地毯的邊緣。為了保持平衡,我無意間揮動了手臂,結果把花瓶從邊桌上撞落。花瓶掉到地上,碎成了無數碎片。我當時嚇壞了,立刻感到一陣強烈的內疚。 事後你做了什麼 在最初的震驚過後,我迅速向朋友道歉,並提出要賠償花瓶。她很生氣是可以理解的,但她很大方地向我保證這只是意外,並沒有怪我。我堅持要彌補過錯,隔天我去了古董店,找了一個我認為她會喜歡的相似花瓶。我還寫了一封真摯的信,表達我的懊悔和對她理解的感激。當我把新花瓶送給她時,她被我的心意感動,並向我保證我們的友誼比什麼物品都重要。這次經歷讓我學會了謹慎的重要性,也體會到真正友誼的珍貴,因為儘管發生了意外,我朋友卻非常寬容和理解。
語法分析
答案使用了多種句型結構,包括複合句和並列句,這有助於整體敘述的連貫性和流暢度。例如,"The accident occurred when I was helping to set the table for dinner" 將多個動作合併在一個句子中。過去式的使用一致且適合敘述過去的事件,如 "I tripped over the edge of a rug" 和 "I went to an antique shop." 敘述中也包含條件式和情態動詞來表達意圖和假設情況,如 "I insisted on making amends" 和 "I thought she would like."
高分詞匯
  • accidental mishap
    意外事故
  • antique porcelain vase
    古董瓷花瓶
  • get-together
    聚會
  • regain my balance
    恢復我的平衡
  • inadvertently
    不小心地
  • shattered into countless pieces
    破碎成無數碎片
  • wave of guilt
    罪惡感的浪潮
  • gracious
    親切的
  • make amends
    彌補
  • heartfelt note
    衷心的筆記
  • touched by the gesture
    被這個舉動感動
  • value of true friendship
    真正友誼的價值
  • forgiving and understanding
    寬容和理解