7 分範例

問題: Do many people grow vegetables in your city?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, a lot of people in my city are starting to grow their own vegetables. They use small gardens or even their balconies to plant them. It's a good way to save money and have fresh food.
是的,我城市裡很多人開始種植自己的蔬菜。他們利用小花園甚至陽台來種植。這是一種省錢並擁有新鮮食物的好方法。
Yes, urban gardening is becoming quite popular in my city due to the health benefits of fresh vegetables. Many people have small gardens or use balcony space for growing vegetables, and there are also community gardens for those who don't have their own space. It's a great way to save money and ensure organic produce.
是的,城市園藝在我的城市越來越受歡迎,這是因為新鮮蔬菜的健康益處。許多人有小花園或利用陽台空間種植蔬菜,還有社區花園供沒有自己空間的人使用。這是一種節省開支並確保有機農產品的好方法。
語法分析
1.現在進行式:「is becoming quite popular」使用現在進行式來描述一個正在發生的趨勢,表示都市園藝的受歡迎程度正在增加。 2.不定詞的使用:「to save money and ensure organic produce」使用不定詞形式來表達都市園藝的目的或結果。
高分詞匯
  • urban gardening
    都市園藝
  • health benefits
    健康益處
  • balcony space
    陽台空間
  • community gardens
    社區花園
  • save money
    省錢
  • organic produce
    有機農產品

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, not many people grow vegetables here. Most people live in apartments, so they don't have space for a garden. They usually buy vegetables from supermarkets.
不,這裡沒有人種很多蔬菜。大多數人住在公寓裡,所以他們沒有空間種花園。他們通常從超市買蔬菜。
No, not many people grow vegetables in my city. Most people live in apartments without space for gardening, and they prefer to buy vegetables from supermarkets or local markets. The busy city life leaves little time for gardening, and some people might not have the knowledge or interest in growing vegetables.
不,我們城市裡沒有很多人種菜。大多數人住在沒有種植空間的公寓裡,他們更喜歡從超市或本地市場購買蔬菜。忙碌的城市生活幾乎沒有時間進行園藝,有些人可能也沒有種菜的知識或興趣。
語法分析
1. 否定結構的使用:「No, not many people grow vegetables in my city.」使用「not many」有效地傳達了種菜的人很少。 2. 複合句結構:「Most people live in apartments without space for gardening, and they prefer to buy vegetables from supermarkets or local markets.」使用「and」連接兩個相關的觀點,提升句子的連貫性和流暢度。
高分詞匯
  • prefer to buy
    偏好購買
  • busy city life
    繁忙的城市生活
  • knowledge or interest
    知識或興趣