7 分範例

問題: Do you have an experience that your teacher thought you did a good job?

思路 1

Yes
是
考官答案
Yes, I remember getting a lot of praise from my teacher for a project I did in school. It was a big deal for me because I worked really hard on it, and it felt great to be recognized.
是的，我記得因為我在學校做的一個專案受到老師的很多讚賞。對我來說這是一件大事，因為我為此付出了很多努力，被認可的感覺非常棒。
Yes, I distinctly remember receiving high praise from my teacher for a project I worked on in school. It was a significant moment for me because I had put a lot of effort into it, and being recognized for my hard work was incredibly rewarding.
是的，我清楚地記得老師對我在學校的一個專案給予高度讚揚。這對我來說是一個重要的時刻，因為我投入了很多努力，並且得到認可讓我感到非常有成就感。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單時態：「I distinctly remember receiving」、「I worked on」的使用有效地傳達了過去已完成的動作，這對於敘述特定經驗是合適的。 2. 因果連接詞：「because」的使用引入了該時刻重要的原因，展現了邏輯連接想法的能力。
高分詞匯
  • distinctly remember
    清楚記得
  • high praise
    高度讚揚
  • significant moment
    重要時刻
  • incredibly rewarding
    令人難以置信的有成就感

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I often felt like my efforts went unnoticed in class. Even though I tried hard, I didn't get much feedback from my teachers, so I wasn't sure if I was doing well or not.
不，我經常覺得我的努力在課堂上沒有被注意到。儘管我很努力，但我沒有從老師那裡得到太多反饋，所以我不確定自己表現得好不好。
No, I often felt overlooked in class, despite putting in a lot of effort. I rarely received feedback from my teachers, which left me uncertain about my performance. Being a quiet student, my efforts sometimes went unnoticed.
不，我常常覺得在課堂上被忽視，儘管我付出了很多努力。我很少收到老師的反饋，這讓我對自己的表現感到不確定。作為一個安靜的學生，我的努力有時候沒有被注意到。
語法分析
1. 對比子句：「despite putting in a lot of effort」使用「despite」來引入對比子句，突顯努力與認可之間的矛盾。 2. 過去式用法：使用像「felt」、「received」和「went」這樣的過去式動詞，表示這些經歷發生在過去，展示了恰當使用過去式的能力。
高分詞匯
  • overlooked
    被忽視
  • rarely received feedback
    很少收到反饋
  • uncertain
    不確定
  • quiet student
    安靜的學生
  • unnoticed
    未被注意到
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