7 分範例
話題: Describe a time when you saw something in the sky
範例
A meteor shower What you saw I'm going to talk about a time when I witnessed a meteor shower. It was an incredible experience to see so many shooting stars streaking across the night sky. Where/when you saw it/them This happened about a year ago when I was on a camping trip with some friends in a remote area far from the city lights. We were in the countryside, which was the perfect spot for stargazing because there was no light pollution to obscure our view of the sky. How long you saw it/them We had been told that the meteor shower would be visible for a few hours, starting around midnight. We stayed up late, wrapped in blankets, and watched the sky for about two hours. During this time, we saw countless meteors, some of which were incredibly bright and left trails that lingered for a few seconds. How you felt about the experience The experience was truly magical and left me in awe of the universe. Seeing the meteor shower made me feel a deep sense of wonder and appreciation for the natural world. It was a humbling reminder of how vast and mysterious the universe is. Sharing this moment with my friends made it even more special, as we all felt a sense of connection and amazement. It was a night I'll never forget, and it sparked a newfound interest in astronomy for me.
流星雨 你所看到的 我想談談我目睹流星雨的那次經歷。看到如此多的流星劃過夜空,真是一個難以置信的體驗。 你在哪裡/什麼時候看到的 這件事發生在大約一年前,當時我和一些朋友在一個遠離城市燈光的偏遠地區露營。我們在鄉村,那裡是觀星的絕佳地點,因為沒有光害干擾我們觀看天空。 你看了多久 我們被告知流星雨會持續幾個小時,大約從午夜開始。我們熬夜,裹著毯子,觀看天空約兩個小時。在這段時間裡,我們看到了數不清的流星,其中一些非常明亮,並留下持續幾秒鐘的尾跡。 你對這次經歷的感受 這次經歷真是奇妙無比,令我對宇宙充滿敬畏。看到流星雨讓我感受到對自然世界的深深驚奇和欣賞。這是一次謙卑的提醒,讓我意識到宇宙有多麼廣大和神祕。與朋友們共享這一刻讓它更加特別,因為我們都感受到一種聯繫和驚嘆。那是一個我永生難忘的夜晚,並激發了我對天文學的新興趣。
語法分析
答案使用了多種句型結構,包括簡單句、複合句和複雜句,這有助於整體的流暢性和連貫性。例如,「It was an incredible experience to see so many shooting stars streaking across the night sky」結合了一個簡單句與分詞片語來增添細節。過去式的使用一致且適合用於敘述過去的事件,如「This happened about a year ago」和「We stayed up late, wrapped in blankets」。答案還有效地使用了描述性語言和修飾語來表達情感和細節,例如「truly magical」、「deep sense of wonder」和「humbling reminder」。
高分詞匯
  • meteor shower
    流星雨
  • shooting stars
    流星
  • streaking across
    掠過天空
  • remote area
    偏遠地區
  • light pollution
    光害
  • stargazing
    觀星
  • linger
    逗留
  • magical
    魔法的
  • awe of the universe
    對宇宙的敬畏
  • sparked a newfound interest
    引發了新的興趣