7 分範例

問題: Are there any changes in your city?

思路 1

Yes, there are many changes
是的,有很多變化
考官答案
Yes, there have been a lot of changes in my city. For example, there are many more high-rise buildings and shopping malls than before. The public transport system has also improved a lot, with new subway lines and more buses, so it's easier to get around. There are also more parks and green spaces, which is nice. But the city has become much busier and more crowded, and technology is everywhere now, like shared bikes and mobile payments.
是的,我的城市發生了很多變化。例如,現在有更多的高樓大廈和購物中心。公共交通系統也有很大改善,有新的地鐵線路和更多的巴士,所以出行更加方便。還有更多的公園和綠地,這很不錯。但城市變得更加繁忙和擁擠,科技無處不在,比如共享單車和移動支付。
Definitely, my city has changed a lot in recent years. There are loads of new high-rise buildings and shopping malls popping up everywhere. Public transport has really improved too, with new subway lines and more frequent buses, making it much more convenient to travel around. Plus, there are more parks and green spaces, which is great for relaxing. On the flip side, the city feels much busier and more crowded than before, and technology has become a huge part of daily life, with things like shared bikes and mobile payments being really common now.
當然,我的城市在近年來變化很大。到處都有很多新的高樓大廈和購物中心興起。公共交通也真的改善了,有了新的地鐵線路和更頻繁的巴士,使得出行變得更加方便。此外,有更多的公園和綠地,這對於放鬆來說非常棒。另一方面,城市感覺比以前更繁忙和擁擠,科技也成為日常生活的重要部分,共享單車和行動支付等東西現在非常普遍。
語法分析
1. 現在完成時:「my city has changed a lot」和「public transport has really improved」使用現在完成時來談論從過去開始並持續到現在的變化。 2. 現在進行時:「popping up everywhere」使用現在進行時來描述正在進行的發展。 3. 比較結構:「much more convenient」和「more crowded than before」使用比較級來強調變化。 4. 非正式用語的使用:像「loads of」和「on the flip side」這樣的短語使答案聽起來自然且富有對話感,這對雅思口語考試非常有幫助。
高分詞匯
  • changed a lot
    改變了很多
  • loads of
    大量的
  • high-rise buildings
    高層建築
  • shopping malls
    購物中心
  • popping up
    彈出
  • public transport
    公共交通
  • improved
    改善
  • new subway lines
    新地鐵線路
  • more frequent buses
    更頻繁的公車
  • parks and green spaces
    公園和綠地
  • much busier
    忙得多
  • more crowded
    更加擁擠
  • technology
    技術
  • shared bikes
    共享單車
  • mobile payments
    行動支付

思路 2

Some things have stayed the same
有些事情保持不變
考官答案
But some things in my city have stayed the same. For example, there are still some old neighborhoods and traditional markets where people go shopping. The way people live and the local food haven't changed much either. We still celebrate the same festivals and keep our culture alive, which I think is really important.
但是我城市裡有些事情依然保持不變。例如,仍然有一些老社區和傳統市場,人們會去那裡購物。人們的生活方式和當地的食物也沒有太大改變。我們依然慶祝相同的節日,並保持我們的文化活力,我認為這非常重要。
However, despite all these changes, some aspects of my city have remained unchanged. For instance, there are still old neighborhoods and traditional markets that have managed to survive all the development. People’s lifestyles and the local cuisine have stayed pretty much the same, and our city’s culture and festivals are still celebrated with the same enthusiasm as before. I think it’s great that we’ve managed to hold onto these traditions even as the city modernizes.
然而,儘管有這些變化,我的城市有些方面依然未曾改變。例如,仍有一些老社區和傳統市場在所有的發展中倖存下來。人們的生活方式和當地的美食基本保持不變,城市的文化和節日仍然以同樣的熱情慶祝。我認為,即使城市現代化,我們能夠堅持這些傳統,這是非常好的。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式:「have remained unchanged」和「have managed to survive」使用現在完成式表示這些情況從過去開始一直持續到現在。 2. 現在簡單式:「People’s lifestyles and the local cuisine have stayed pretty much the same」和「culture and festivals are still celebrated」使用現在簡單式來描述一般事實或習慣。 3. 對比結構:「However, despite all these changes」的使用引入對比,展示了使用連接詞以增強連貫性的能力。 4. 關係子句:「that have managed to survive all the development」是一個限制性關係子句,為句子增加細節和複雜性。
高分詞匯
  • remained unchanged
    保持不變
  • old neighborhoods
    老社區
  • traditional markets
    傳統市場
  • managed to survive
    設法生存下來
  • development
    發展
  • stayed pretty much the same
    基本保持不變
  • culture and festivals
    文化與節慶
  • celebrated with enthusiasm
    以熱情慶祝
  • hold onto these traditions
    堅守這些傳統
  • modernizes
    現代化