7 分範例

問題: Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because most people like it. You can find different flavors, so it's easy to choose one that the person will like. It's also easy to buy and makes a nice gift.
是的,我認為巧克力是一個不錯的禮物,因為大多數人都喜歡它。你可以找到不同的口味,所以很容易選擇一個對方會喜歡的。它也很容易購買,是一份很好的禮物。
Yes, I believe chocolate is an excellent gift choice because it's a universally loved treat. It comes in various flavors and types, allowing you to personalize it to the recipient's taste. Additionally, chocolate is often associated with celebrations and special occasions, adding a festive touch to the gift.
是的,我相信巧克力是很棒的禮物選擇,因為它是普遍受歡迎的甜點。它有各種口味和種類,讓你能根據收禮人的喜好來個性化。此外,巧克力常與慶祝活動和特殊場合相關聯,為禮物增添節日氣氛。
語法分析
1. 形容詞的使用:使用了如「excellent」、「universally loved」和「festive」等形容詞,豐富了描述並對巧克力作為禮物表達了明確的觀點。 2. 現在簡單式的使用:全文皆使用現在簡單式來表達一般事實和信念,例如「chocolate is an excellent gift choice」和「it comes in various flavors」。
高分詞匯
  • excellent gift choice
    優秀的禮物選擇
  • universally loved treat
    廣受喜愛的美食
  • various flavors and types
    各種口味和類型
  • personalize
    個性化
  • associated with celebrations and special occasions
    與慶祝活動和特殊場合相關聯
  • festive touch
    節日氣氛

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I don't think chocolate is always a good gift. Some people can't eat it because of allergies or diets. Also, it might not be special enough for some occasions.
不,我不認為巧克力總是適合作為禮物。有些人因為過敏或飲食限制無法食用。此外,對某些場合來說,它可能不夠特別。
No, I don't think chocolate is always a suitable gift. Some people may have dietary restrictions or allergies to chocolate, and it might not be considered a thoughtful or personal gift for certain occasions. Additionally, in hot climates, chocolate can melt and become messy, which is not ideal.
不,我不認為巧克力總是合適的禮物。有些人可能有飲食限制或對巧克力過敏,對某些場合來說,巧克力可能不被認為是體貼或個人的禮物。此外,在炎熱的氣候下,巧克力可能會融化並變得凌亂,這並不理想。
語法分析
1.情態動詞:「Some people may have dietary restrictions or allergies」中使用的 "may" 表示可能性,展現了對語法的細膩理解。 2.連接詞:使用 "and" 連接原因以及使用 "or" 表示選擇,展示了連接詞在清晰和連貫表達中的有效運用。
高分詞匯
  • suitable gift
    合適的禮物
  • dietary restrictions
    飲食限制
  • allergies
    過敏症
  • thoughtful or personal gift
    貼心或個人禮物
  • hot climates
    炎熱氣候