7 分範例

問題: Have you ever been praised or encouraged by your teacher?

思路 1

Yes
是
考官答案
Yes, I remember my teacher praised me for a project I worked really hard on. It made me feel good and motivated me to keep trying my best. It was nice to be recognized in front of the class.
是的，我記得我的老師讚揚了我一個我非常努力完成的專案。這讓我感覺很好，並激勵我繼續盡力而為。在全班面前被認可真是太好了。
Yes, I have been praised by my teacher for a project I put a lot of effort into. Receiving that praise was incredibly motivating and encouraged me to continue improving. I distinctly remember my teacher highlighting my efforts in front of the class, which really boosted my confidence and interest in the subject.
是的，我因一個我付出很多努力的專案而受到老師的讚賞。獲得那份讚賞讓我非常有動力，並鼓勵我持續進步。我清楚記得老師在班上表揚我的努力，這真的大大提升了我的信心和對這門課的興趣。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式：「I have been praised」使用現在完成式來表示被讚揚的動作與現在時刻有關聯。 2. 過去簡單式：「I distinctly remember my teacher highlighting my efforts」使用過去簡單式來描述過去的一個特定事件。
高分詞匯
  • put a lot of effort into
    投入大量努力
  • incredibly motivating
    令人難以置信的激勵人心
  • distinctly remember
    清晰地記得
  • highlighting my efforts
    突出我的努力
  • boosted my confidence
    提升了我的自信心

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I don't really remember being praised by a teacher. They mostly gave us feedback to help us improve. I think I got more encouragement from my friends than from my teachers.
不，我不太記得有被老師稱讚過。他們大多給我們反饋，幫助我們進步。我覺得我從朋友那裡得到的鼓勵比從老師那裡多。
No, I don't recall any specific instances of being praised by a teacher. My teachers tended to focus more on providing constructive criticism. I was encouraged more by my peers than by my teachers, and I relied on self-motivation rather than external encouragement from teachers.
不，我不記得有老師特別稱讚過我的具體例子。我的老師們傾向於提供建設性的批評。我更多是受到同儕的鼓勵，而不是老師的鼓勵，我依靠的是自我激勵，而非老師的外在鼓勵。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單時態的使用：答案使用了過去簡單時態（"I don't recall"、"tended"、"was encouraged"、"relied"）來描述過去的經驗，這對於問題的情境來說是適當的。 2. 對比結構：運用 "more... than" 和 "rather than" 來比較和對比不同的鼓勵和動機來源，使回答更有深度。
高分詞匯
  • constructive criticism
    建設性的批評
  • peers
    同儕
  • self-motivation
    自我激勵
  • external encouragement
    外部鼓勵
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