7 分範例

問題: Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important. They save a lot of time and effort compared to doing it by hand. They help keep things clean and let people do other things or spend time with family.
是的,我認為洗衣機和掃地機器人很重要。它們比手工清潔節省了很多時間和精力。它們幫助保持環境整潔,讓人們可以做其他事情或與家人共度時光。
Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential. They save a significant amount of time and effort compared to traditional methods, and they are crucial for maintaining hygiene and cleanliness in our daily lives. Moreover, they allow people to focus on other important tasks or spend more quality time with their families.
是的,我相信洗衣機和掃地機是必不可少的。它們相比傳統方法節省了大量時間和精力,對於維持我們日常生活中的衛生和清潔至關重要。此外,它們讓人們能夠專注於其他重要的任務或花更多優質時間與家人相處。
語法分析
1.比較結構的使用:「compared to traditional methods」有效地比較了機器與傳統方法的效率,顯示出應試者使用比較結構的能力。 2.因果結構:「they allow people to focus on other important tasks or spend more quality time with their families」使用因果結構來解釋使用機器的好處。
高分詞匯
  • essential
    必要的
  • significant amount of time and effort
    大量的時間和精力
  • crucial for maintaining hygiene and cleanliness
    對維持衛生和清潔至關重要
  • moreover
    此外
  • quality time
    優質時間

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I don't think they're that important. Some people like to wash clothes and sweep floors by hand because they think it's cleaner. Also, these machines can be expensive, so not everyone can afford them.
不,我不認為它們那麼重要。有些人喜歡手洗衣服和掃地,因為他們認為這樣比較乾淨。此外,這些機器可能很貴,所以不是每個人都買得起。
No, I don't think washing machines and sweeping machines are essential for everyone. Some people prefer traditional methods, like hand washing and sweeping, as they believe these methods provide a more thorough clean. Additionally, in some cultures, these machines are considered a luxury rather than a necessity, and they can be quite expensive to purchase and maintain, which might not be feasible for everyone.
不,我不認為洗衣機和掃地機對每個人來說都是必需的。有些人偏好傳統方法,比如手洗和掃地,因為他們認為這些方法能提供更徹底的清潔。此外,在某些文化中,這些機器被視為奢侈品而非必需品,而且購買和維護成本相當高,這對並非所有人來說都是可行的。
語法分析
1. 否定的使用:回應以「No, I don't think」開始,有效地使用否定來表達不同意見或不同看法。 2. 比較結構的使用:「more thorough clean」這個片語使用比較結構來比較傳統方法與機器清潔,表示更高程度的潔淨。
高分詞匯
  • essential
    必要的
  • traditional methods
    傳統方法
  • thorough clean
    徹底清潔
  • luxury
    豪華
  • necessity
    必要性
  • expensive
    昂貴
  • feasible
    可行的