7 分範例

問題: Do you prefer dry or wet weather?

思路 1

Dry Weather
乾燥天氣
考官答案
I like dry weather more because I enjoy going outside for activities like hiking and picnics. It's easier to plan these things when I know it won't rain.
我比較喜歡乾燥的天氣,因為我喜歡外出進行徒步旅行和野餐等活動。當我知道不會下雨時,計劃這些活動會比較容易。
I prefer dry weather because I enjoy outdoor activities like hiking and picnics, which are much more enjoyable when it's dry. It also means fewer chances of getting caught in the rain without an umbrella, and I find it easier to dress without worrying about waterproof clothing.
我喜歡乾燥的天氣,因為我喜歡戶外活動,如健行和野餐,在乾燥的時候會更加愉快。這也意味著較少機會在沒有雨傘的情況下被淋到雨,而且我覺得穿衣服時不用擔心防水衣物會更方便。
語法分析
1. 使用比較結構:「which are much more enjoyable when it's dry」這句話使用比較結構來強調乾燥天氣對戶外活動的優勢。 2. 使用不定詞:「to dress without worrying about waterproof clothing」使用不定詞形式來表達目的或意圖,指出在乾燥天氣中穿衣的便利性。
高分詞匯
  • enjoyable
    愉快的
  • waterproof clothing
    防水衣物

思路 2

Wet Weather
雨天
考官答案
I prefer wet weather because I like the sound of rain. It's relaxing and makes me feel calm. I also enjoy staying inside with a book when it's raining.
我比較喜歡潮濕的天氣,因為我喜歡雨聲。這讓人放鬆並感到平靜。下雨時,我也喜歡待在室內看書。
I actually prefer wet weather because I love the sound of rain; it's very calming and helps me relax. Rainy days make the environment look fresh and green, and I enjoy the cooler temperatures that often accompany wet weather. It's also a great excuse to cozy up with a hot cup of tea or coffee.
我其實比較喜歡潮濕的天氣,因為我喜歡雨聲;它非常平靜,有助於我放鬆。雨天讓環境看起來清新翠綠,我也喜歡通常伴隨潮濕天氣的較涼爽氣溫。這也是一個很好的理由,讓人能夠裹在溫暖的毛毯裡喝一杯熱茶或咖啡。
語法分析
1. 連接詞的使用:「because」用來引出原因子句,有效地解釋了為什麼偏好雨天。 2. 不定詞短語的使用:「to cozy up with a hot cup of tea or coffee」使用不定詞短語來描述享受雨天的目的或結果。
高分詞匯
  • calming
    平靜的
  • relax
    放鬆
  • fresh and green
    清新翠綠
  • cooler temperatures
    較涼的氣溫
  • cozy up
    依偎