7 分範例
話題: Describe a person who inspired you to do something interesting
範例
An inspiring teacher Who he/she is I'm going to talk about my high school art teacher, Mr. Thompson. He was a truly inspiring individual who had a profound impact on my life during my formative years. How you knew him/her I first met Mr. Thompson when I was in the ninth grade. He was my art teacher, and from the very first class, I could tell that he was different from any other teacher I had encountered. His passion for art was contagious, and he had a unique way of encouraging students to explore their creativity. What interesting thing you did One of the most interesting things I did, thanks to Mr. Thompson, was participate in a community mural project. He organized this initiative to beautify a neglected wall in our neighborhood. It was a massive undertaking, involving students, local artists, and community members. We spent weeks planning, sketching, and finally painting the mural, which depicted scenes from our town's history and culture. And explain how he/she inspired you to do it Mr. Thompson inspired me to take part in this project by showing me the power of art to bring people together and make a positive impact on the community. He often spoke about how art could be a force for change and how it could transform ordinary spaces into something extraordinary. His enthusiasm and dedication were infectious, and he made me believe that I could contribute to something meaningful, even as a high school student. Through his guidance, I learned not only about art techniques but also about teamwork, perseverance, and the importance of giving back to the community. The mural project was a turning point for me, as it opened my eyes to the potential of art as a tool for social change. Mr. Thompson's encouragement and belief in my abilities gave me the confidence to pursue my passion for art further, and I will always be grateful for the inspiration he provided.
一位激勵人心的老師 他/她是誰 我要談談我的高中美術老師湯普森先生。他是一位真正激勵人心的人,在我成長的關鍵時期對我的生命產生了深遠的影響。 你是如何認識他/她的 我第一次遇見湯普森先生是在九年級時。他是我的美術老師,從第一堂課開始,我就能感覺到他與我遇過的其他老師不同。他對藝術的熱情具有感染力,並且他有一種獨特的方式鼓勵學生發掘他們的創造力。 你做過的有趣事情 多虧了湯普森先生,我參加了一個社區壁畫項目,這是我做過最有趣的事情之一。他組織了這個計劃,旨在美化我們社區一面被忽視的牆壁。這是一項龐大的工程,涉及學生、當地藝術家和社區成員。我們花了數週時間規劃、素描,最終將壁畫繪製完成,壁畫描繪了我們城鎮的歷史和文化場景。 並解釋他/她如何激勵你去做這件事 湯普森先生通過向我展示藝術如何凝聚人心並對社區產生積極影響,激勵我參與這個項目。他經常講述藝術如何成為變革的力量,如何將普通的空間轉變成非凡的地方。他的熱情與奉獻精神具有感染力,讓我相信即使作為一名高中生,我也能為有意義的事情做出貢獻。 在他的指導下,我不僅學到了藝術技巧,還學到了團隊合作、堅持不懈以及回饋社區的重要性。壁畫項目成為我的轉折點,讓我看到了藝術作為社會變革工具的潛力。湯普森先生的鼓勵和對我能力的信任,使我有信心進一步追求我的藝術熱情,我將永遠感激他給予的啟發。
語法分析
答案有效地使用了各種句型結構,包括複雜句,以傳達詳細的信息。例如,“He was a truly inspiring individual who had a profound impact on my life during my formative years.”這句話使用了關係子句來增加深度。過去式的使用一致且適合於敘述過去的事件,如“I first met Mr. Thompson when I was in the ninth grade.”答案還包括使用情態動詞來表達可能性和能力,如“He made me believe that I could contribute to something meaningful.”
高分詞匯
  • profound impact
    深遠的影響
  • formative years
    成長歲月
  • contagious passion
    充滿感染力的熱情
  • explore creativity
    探索創意
  • community mural project
    社區壁畫計畫
  • beautify
    美化
  • massive undertaking
    龐大的任務
  • local artists
    本地藝術家
  • positive impact
    正面影響
  • force for change
    改變的力量
  • transform ordinary spaces
    改造普通空間
  • enthusiasm and dedication
    熱情與投入
  • teamwork
    團隊合作
  • perseverance
    毅力
  • giving back to the community
    回饋社區
  • turning point
    轉捩點
  • tool for social change
    社會變革的工具
  • pursue passion
    追求熱情