7 分範例

問題: Did you send more messages when you were younger?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, I sent more messages when I was younger. I had more free time to chat with my friends from school, and texting was new and exciting back then.
是的，我年輕時發送了更多訊息。當時我有更多空閒時間與學校的朋友聊天，且發短信當時是新穎且令人興奮的。
Yes, I definitely sent more messages when I was younger. I had more free time to chat with my school friends, and texting was a new and exciting way to communicate. I was also more active on social media platforms, which involved a lot of messaging.
是的，我年輕的時候確實發送了更多的訊息。我有更多的空閒時間與學校朋友聊天，發短信是一種新穎又令人興奮的溝通方式。我在社交媒體平台上也更活躍，這涉及大量的訊息交流。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單式：答案使用了過去簡單式（"sent", "had", "was"）來描述過去的動作和狀態，這對於問題的語境來說是合適的。 2. 連接詞的使用："and" 的使用連接相關的想法，有助於創造連貫且流暢的回答。
高分詞匯
  • free time
    空閒時間
  • new and exciting
    全新且令人興奮
  • active on social media platforms
    活躍於社交媒體平台

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I send more messages now because of work. Messaging apps are better now, so I use them more often. I have more responsibilities, so I need to communicate more.
不，我現在因為工作發送更多訊息。訊息應用程式現在更好用，所以我使用得更頻繁。我有更多責任，所以需要更多溝通。
No, I actually send more messages now because of work and professional communication. Messaging apps are more advanced and convenient now, so I use them more frequently. Plus, I have more responsibilities, so I need to communicate more often. When I was younger, I preferred face-to-face communication or phone calls.
不，因為工作和專業上的溝通，我現在其實發送更多訊息。即時通訊應用程式現在更先進且方便，所以我使用得更頻繁。此外，我有更多責任，因此需要更常溝通。當我年輕時，我較喜歡面對面交流或打電話。
語法分析
1. 比較結構：「I actually send more messages now」使用比較結構來比較現在與過去發送訊息的頻率。 2. 因果連接詞：「because of work and professional communication」使用「because of」來引入原因，解釋為什麼現在發送更多訊息。
高分詞匯
  • advanced and convenient
    先進且方便
  • frequently
    頻繁地
  • responsibilities
    職責
  • face-to-face communication
    面對面溝通
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