7 分範例

問題: Do you like making plans?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, I like making plans because it helps me organize my day. I feel more productive when I know what to expect, and it helps me achieve my goals.
是的，我喜歡制定計劃，因為這有助於我整理一天的行程。當我知道會發生什麼時，我會感覺更有生產力，這也幫助我達成目標。
Yes, I really enjoy making plans because it allows me to organize my day and know what to expect. Planning helps me stay productive and achieve my goals, and I find using planners and apps to keep track of tasks quite satisfying. It reduces stress and gives me a sense of control over my life.
是的，我真的很喜歡制定計劃，因為這讓我能夠組織我的一天並知道會發生什麼。計劃幫助我保持高效並達成目標，我發現使用計劃本和應用程式來追蹤任務非常令人滿意。它減少了壓力，並給了我對生活的掌控感。
語法分析
1. 不定詞的使用：答案使用了像 "to organize"、"to keep track" 和 "to achieve" 這樣的不定詞動詞來解釋規劃的好處，展示了對動詞形式的良好掌握。 2. 因果關係：使用 "because" 和 "and" 有效地連接了想法，說明了制定計劃的原因和好處，增強了回答的連貫性和流暢性。
高分詞匯
  • organize my day
    安排我的一天
  • stay productive
    保持高效
  • achieve my goals
    達成我的目標
  • keep track of tasks
    追蹤任務
  • reduces stress
    減輕壓力
  • sense of control
    控制感

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I don't like making plans. I prefer to be spontaneous and just go with the flow. Plans can change, so I don't see the point in spending time on them.
不，我不喜歡制定計劃。我更喜歡隨性而為，順其自然。計劃會改變，所以我覺得花時間在計劃上沒有意義。
No, I'm not fond of making plans. I prefer to be spontaneous and go with the flow. Making plans can be stressful and time-consuming, and I find that they often change anyway. I enjoy the excitement of unexpected opportunities and usually rely on others to make plans, just following along with them.
不，我不喜歡制定計劃。我比較喜歡隨性而為，順其自然。制定計劃可能會讓人感到壓力大且耗時，而且我發現計劃往往會改變。我喜歡意外機會帶來的刺激，通常依賴別人來制定計劃，然後跟著他們走。
語法分析
1. 形容詞的使用：答案中使用了像 "stressful" 和 "time-consuming" 這樣的形容詞來描述制定計劃的性質，增添了回應的深度。 2. 不定詞片語的使用："I prefer to be spontaneous and go with the flow" 這句話使用了不定詞片語來表達偏好，顯示出對句子結構的良好掌握。
高分詞匯
  • fond of
    喜愛
  • spontaneous
    自發的
  • go with the flow
    隨遇而安
  • stressful and time-consuming
    壓力大且耗時
  • excitement of unexpected opportunities
    意外機會帶來的興奮感
  • rely on others
    依賴他人
  • following along with them
    跟隨他們
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