7 分範例

問題: Do people in your country often send flowers to others?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, people in my country often send flowers, especially for special occasions like birthdays and weddings. It's a traditional way to show love and appreciation, and there are many florists in the cities, so it's easy to do.
是的,我國的人們經常送花,特別是在生日和婚禮等特殊場合。這是一種傳統的表達愛意和感謝的方式,城市裡有許多花店,所以這很容易做到。
Yes, sending flowers is quite common in my country, particularly for special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries. It's a traditional way to show love and appreciation. With florists being common in cities and flower delivery services widely available, it's quite convenient to send flowers.
是的,在我國送花相當普遍,尤其是在生日、婚禮和週年紀念等特殊場合。這是一種表達愛意和感謝的傳統方式。由於花店在城市中普遍存在,且花卉送貨服務廣泛可用,送花非常方便。
語法分析
1. 副詞的使用:「quite」和「particularly」的使用有效強調了送花的頻率和情境,為描述增添了深度。 2. 現在分詞的使用:「With florists being common in cities」使用現在分詞片語,提供了關於花店普遍存在的額外資訊,增強了句子結構。
高分詞匯
  • special occasions
    特別場合
  • traditional way
    傳統方式
  • florists being common
    花店很常見
  • flower delivery services widely available
    鮮花配送服務廣泛可用
  • convenient
    方便

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, people here don't send flowers as much. They prefer practical gifts like gift cards or gadgets because flowers can be expensive and don't last long.
不,這裡的人不太送花。他們更喜歡實用的禮物,比如禮品卡或小工具,因為花很貴且不耐久。
No, people in my country don't often send flowers. They tend to prefer more practical gifts like gift cards or gadgets, as flowers can be expensive and don't last long. Additionally, some people have allergies to flowers, and cultural preferences might lean towards other forms of gifts, like food or handmade items.
不,我們國家的人不常送花。他們傾向於送更實用的禮物,比如禮品卡或小工具,因為花很貴且不易保存。此外,有些人對花粉過敏,文化偏好也可能傾向於其他形式的禮物,比如食物或手工製品。
語法分析
1. 使用否定形式:答案以否定形式「don't often send flowers」開頭,明確回應問題並提供直接的回答。 2. 使用連接詞:「as」和「additionally」的使用有助於連接觀點,提供原因和補充資訊,增強回應的連貫性和流暢度。
高分詞匯
  • practical gifts
    實用禮物
  • expensive
    昂貴
  • last long
    最後長久
  • allergies
    過敏症
  • cultural preferences
    文化偏好
  • handmade items
    手工製作的物品