7 分範例

問題: When was the last time you bought a pen or pencil?

思路 1

Recently
最近
考官答案
I bought a new pen last week because I needed it for taking notes at work. My old one ran out of ink, so I had to get a new one quickly.
我上週買了一支新筆,因為我需要它來工作時做筆記。我的舊筆已經沒有墨水了,所以我必須迅速買一支新筆。
Just last week, I bought a new pen for taking notes at work. My old pen ran out of ink, and I needed a reliable one to jot down important information during meetings.
就在上週,我購買了一支新的筆用來在工作時做筆記。我的舊筆墨水用完了,我需要一支可靠的筆在會議中記下重要信息。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單時態的使用:答案使用了過去簡單時態("bought"、"ran out"、"needed")來描述過去的一個已完成的動作,這對於上下文是合適的。 2. 複合句:使用 "and" 來連接兩個相關的子句("My old pen ran out of ink, and I needed a reliable one")使句子更複雜且更具信息量。
高分詞匯
  • reliable
    可靠
  • jot down
    記下

思路 2

Not Very Recently
不太最近
考官答案
I think it was a few months ago when I bought some pens for my exams. I don't really buy them often because I use my phone or computer for most things.
我想大約幾個月前我為考試買了一些筆。我不常買筆,因為我大多數的事情都用手機或電腦。
I believe it was a few months ago when I purchased a set of pens for my exams. I don't buy them frequently since I usually rely on digital devices for writing nowadays.
我相信大約幾個月前我為考試購買了一套筆。我不經常購買它們,因為我現在通常依賴數位設備來寫作。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單時態的使用:「我相信這是在幾個月前我為我的考試購買了一套鋼筆。」過去簡單時態正確地用來描述發生在過去的特定事件。 2. 副詞的使用:「經常」和「通常」用來描述行動的頻率,為回答增添了清晰度。
高分詞匯
  • purchased
    購買
  • frequently
    經常
  • rely on digital devices
    依賴數位設備