7 分範例

問題: Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, I still keep in touch with my primary school teacher. I sometimes send them messages to let them know how I'm doing. We also exchange holiday greetings, which is nice.
是的，我仍然與我的小學老師保持聯繫。我有時會發訊息給他們，讓他們知道我過得怎麼樣。我們也會互相祝賀節日，這很好。
Yes, I occasionally send messages to my primary school teacher to update them on my life. We also exchange holiday greetings and well-wishes. Social media has made it much easier to stay connected, and I appreciate keeping in touch with someone who had such a significant influence on my early education.
是的，我偶爾會發訊息給我的小學老師，更新我的生活。我們也會互相祝賀節日和送上祝福。社交媒體讓保持聯繫變得容易多了，我很感激能與對我早期教育有重大影響的人保持聯繫。
語法分析
1. 副詞的使用：「偶爾」用來描述發送信息的頻率，顯示出良好的副詞掌握能力以指示時間。 2. 複雜的句子結構：「社交媒體使得保持聯繫變得更容易，我感謝能夠與對我早期教育有重大影響的人保持聯繫。」這句話使用連接詞和關係子句結合了兩個想法，展示了創造複雜句子的能力。
高分詞匯
  • occasionally
    偶爾
  • update them on my life
    告訴他們我的生活近況
  • exchange holiday greetings and well-wishes
    互致節日問候和祝福
  • social media
    社交媒體
  • significant influence
    重要影響

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I don't keep in touch with my primary school teacher. I moved to a different city, and it's been many years since then. I don't have their contact information anymore.
不，我沒有與我的小學老師保持聯繫。我搬到了另一個城市，自那以後已經過了很多年。我也沒有他們的聯絡資訊了。
No, I lost touch with my primary school teacher after moving to a different city. It's been many years, and I don't have their contact information anymore. Life has gotten busy, and I haven't thought about reaching out. Plus, I don't use social media much, which makes it harder to stay in touch.
不，我在搬到另一個城市後失去了與小學老師的聯繫。已經很多年了，我不再有他們的聯繫方式。生活變得繁忙，我也沒有考慮要聯繫他們。而且，我不太使用社交媒體，這讓保持聯繫更難。
語法分析
1. 過去簡單時態：我在搬到另一個城市後失去了與小學老師的聯繫。此處過去簡單時態的用法有效地表明了一個已完成的過去行動。 2. 現在完成時態：生活變得忙碌，我沒有想到要聯繫。現在完成時態用來描述與當前時刻相關的行動，顯示過去行動對當前情況的持續影響。
高分詞匯
  • lost touch
    失去聯繫
  • contact information
    聯絡資訊
  • reaching out
    伸出援手
  • stay in touch
    保持聯繫
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