7 分範例
話題: Describe a place in your hometown/city that is different from other places and you would like to visit with your parents/friends
範例
A unique park in my hometown Where it is I'm going to talk about a unique park in my hometown called Harmony Park. It's located on the outskirts of the city, nestled between a small forest and a serene lake. Why you think it is different What makes Harmony Park different from other places in my hometown is its blend of natural beauty and artistic installations. Unlike typical parks that have just trees, benches, and playgrounds, Harmony Park features a variety of sculptures, murals, and interactive art pieces created by local artists. The park also has themed gardens, such as a Japanese Zen garden and a butterfly garden, which add to its unique charm. Who you would like to go there with I would love to visit Harmony Park with my parents and close friends. My parents enjoy nature and art, so I think they would appreciate the tranquility and creativity that the park offers. My friends, on the other hand, are always up for exploring new and interesting places, and I believe they would find the interactive art installations particularly engaging. And explain whether you have been there Yes, I have been to Harmony Park a few times, but each visit feels like a new experience because there's always something new to discover. The first time I went, I was amazed by the sheer variety of art and the peaceful atmosphere. I remember spending hours just walking around, taking photos, and enjoying the beauty of the place. Every time I go back, I find new art pieces or different flowers in bloom, making each visit unique and memorable.
我家鄉的一個獨特公園 它的位置 我想談談我家鄉的一個獨特公園,名叫和諧公園。它位於市郊,坐落在一片小森林和一個平靜湖泊之間。 你為什麼認為它與眾不同 和諧公園之所以與我家鄉的其他地方不同,是因為它結合了自然美景和藝術裝置。與那些只有樹木、長椅和遊樂場的典型公園不同,和諧公園展示了許多當地藝術家創作的雕塑、壁畫和互動藝術作品。公園還有主題花園,例如日本禪園和蝴蝶花園,這些都增添了它獨特的魅力。 你希望和誰一起去那裡 我很想和我的父母及親密朋友一起去和諧公園。我的父母喜歡自然和藝術,所以我認為他們會欣賞公園所提供的寧靜和創造力。而我的朋友則總是樂於探索新的有趣地方,我相信他們會對互動藝術裝置特別感興趣。 並解釋你是否去過那裡 是的,我去過和諧公園幾次,但每次的訪問都感覺像是新的體驗,因為總有新的東西可以發現。我第一次去的時候,對於各種各樣的藝術作品和寧靜的氛圍感到驚訝。我記得花了幾個小時四處漫步、拍照,享受這個地方的美。每次回去,我都會發現新的藝術作品或不同的花朵盛開,使每次的訪問都獨特而難忘。
語法分析
答案有效地使用了各種句型,包括簡單句、複合句和複雜句,這增強了整體的流暢性和連貫性。例如,「它位於城市的邊緣,坐落在一片小森林和一個寧靜湖泊之間」,結合了多個信息,使用了連接詞和描述性短語。「我去過和諧公園幾次」中使用的現在完成時適合描述與現在有關的過去經歷。答案還使用了關係子句來增加細節,例如「這增添了其獨特的魅力」。
高分詞匯
  • unique park
    獨特的公園
  • outskirts
    郊區
  • nestled
    窩藏
  • serene lake
    寧靜的湖泊
  • blend of natural beauty and artistic installations
    自然美與藝術裝置的融合
  • sculptures
    雕塑
  • murals
    壁畫
  • interactive art pieces
    互動藝術作品
  • local artists
    本地藝術家
  • themed gardens
    主題花園
  • Japanese Zen garden
    日本禪宗庭園
  • butterfly garden
    蝴蝶花園
  • tranquility
    寧靜
  • creativity
    創造力
  • interactive art installations
    互動藝術裝置
  • sheer variety
    純粹的多樣性
  • peaceful atmosphere
    和平的氛圍
  • bloom
    盛開
  • unique and memorable
    獨特且難忘