7 分範例
話題: Describe an activity you enjoyed in your free time when you were young
範例
A meal for the family What it was I'm going to talk about the time I cooked a huge meal for all my family at my house about one month ago. Where you did it The cooking and dining all took place in my home, specifically in the kitchen and dining area which we had decorated lightly for the occasion. Who you did it with I was assisted by my uncle, who is a professional chef. He guided me through the entire process, from planning the menu to the actual cooking. The rest of my family, including my parents, sister, and cousins, were the guests who enjoyed the meal. And explain why you enjoyed it I thoroughly enjoyed this activity for several reasons. Firstly, it was a chance to bond with my uncle over our shared love for cooking. Learning from him as we prepared each dish was not only educational but also incredibly fun. Secondly, the joy and satisfaction that came from seeing my family enjoy the food we had prepared was immense. It was a fulfilling experience to cater to their tastes and preferences, making the occasion even more special. Lastly, the entire process of organizing, cooking, and hosting the meal was a rewarding challenge that left me tired but very happy. It was a memorable day that combined family, food, and fun, making it a truly enjoyable experience.
為家人準備一頓餐 當時發生了什麼 我要談談一個月前在家裡為全家人準備豐盛大餐的時刻。 地點 所有的烹飪和用餐都在我家裡進行，具體來說是在廚房和用餐區，我們為了這個場合輕輕地裝飾過。 和誰一起 我得到了我叔叔的幫助，他是一位專業廚師。他指導我從規劃菜單到實際烹飪的整個過程。我的家人，包括父母、妹妹和表兄弟姐妹們，都是享用這頓大餐的客人。 並解釋你為什麼喜歡這個活動 我很喜歡這個活動有幾個原因。首先，這是一個與叔叔一起共享烹飪樂趣的機會。和他一起準備每道菜，不僅有教育性，還非常有趣。其次，看到家人享用我們準備的食物帶來的喜悅與滿足感是巨大的。迎合他們的口味和喜好是一種充實的經歷，使這個場合更加特別。最後，整個籌備、烹飪和招待大餐的過程是一個具有挑戰性的獎勵性任務，讓我感到疲憊但非常開心。這是一個融合家庭、食物和樂趣的難忘日子，使它成為一個真正愉快的經歷。
語法分析
回答有效地使用了各種語法結構，有助於清晰和詳細的敘述。他正確地使用了過去進行時和簡單過去時態來描述事件，例如“我要談談我煮飯的時候”和“我們已經裝飾好了”。像“是”和“是”這樣的情態動詞正確地設置了過去的場景。此外，答案組織良好，從一部分過渡到另一部分時有清晰的過渡標題，這有助於保持邏輯流暢。連接詞和介詞的使用有效地將想法連接在一起，為敘述增添了連貫性，正如“從計劃菜單到實際烹飪”所看到的那樣。
高分詞匯
  • - **huge meal**: Indicates the scale of the cooking endeavor.
    - **豐盛的一餐**：表示做飯的規模。
  • - **decorated lightly**: Suggests a festive but not overdone atmosphere.
    - **輕裝飾**: 暗示了一種節日氣氛，但不是過度裝飾。
  • - **professional chef**: Highlights the expertise brought into the cooking process.
    - 專業廚師: 強調烹飪過程中所帶來的專業知識。
  • - **guided me through**: Implies detailed and supportive instruction.
    - **引導我通過**：暗示詳細和支持性的指導。
  • - **educational but also incredibly fun**: Contrasts learning with enjoyment, enhancing the appeal of the experience.
    - **專注於教育但同時非常有趣**：對比學習與享受，增強體驗的吸引力。
  • - **joy and satisfaction**: Emotional benefits derived from the activity.
    - 快樂和滿足感：從活動中獲得的情感益處。
  • - **fulfilling experience**: Suggests a deep sense of achievement.
    - 實現經驗: 暗示著深切的成就感。
  • - **rewarding challenge**: Conveys that the effort was worthwhile despite difficulties.
    「富有成就感的挑戰」：表明雖然困難重重，但努力是值得的。
  • - **memorable day**: Emphasizes the lasting impact of the experience.
    - **難忘的一天**：強調經歷的持久影響。
  • These vocabulary choices enrich the narrative by providing specific details and emotional depth, painting a vivid picture of the experience and its impact.
    這些詞彙選擇豐富了敘述，提供了具體細節和情感深度，描繪了一幅生動的經歷及其影響的圖像。