7 分範例

問題: Is a public park necessary in every area?Why?

思路 1

Yes, it is necessary
是的,這是必要的。
考官答案
Definitely, it's very important to have a public park in each area. Parks are really good for physical activities like jogging, playing sports, or doing yoga. They are also peaceful places to relax in the busy city. Parks are where people can relax, breathe fresh air, and see the beauty of nature, which is important for mental health.
當然,在每個地區都有一個公園是非常重要的。公園確實非常適合進行身體活動,如慢跑、運動或瑜伽。它們也是在繁忙城市中放鬆的寧靜地方。公園是人們可以放鬆、呼吸新鮮空氣、看到大自然美景的地方,這對於精神健康是重要的。
Absolutely, having a public park in every area is essential. Parks serve as a great platform for physical activity; they're perfect for jogging, playing sports, or even doing yoga. Besides, they offer a serene spot for relaxation amidst the hustle and bustle of city life. It's a place where people can unwind, breathe fresh air, and enjoy nature's beauty, which is crucial for mental health.
絕對是的,每個地區都應該有一個公園是必要的。公園是一個很好的運動平台;它們很適合慢跑、運動或者甚至練瑜伽。此外,它們提供了一個安靜的地方,在城市生活的喧囂中放鬆身心。這是人們可以放鬆、呼吸新鮮空氣和享受大自然之美的地方,對於心理健康至關重要。
語法分析
現在分詞作狀語:“作為一個很好的體育活動平台”,使用現在分詞作狀語,描述公園的功能,使句子更加生動和具體。 分詞結構:“非常適合慢跑,打球,甚至做瑜伽”,使用分詞結構列舉公園適合進行的活動,增加了句子的詳細性和信息量。
高分詞匯
  • jogging
    慢跑
  • serene
    平靜
  • relaxation
    放鬆
  • hustle and bustle
    繁忙喧囂
  • unwind
    放鬆

思路 2

Not always necessary
不總是必要
考官答案
Public parks are good, but they're not always needed in every place, especially in cities where there isn't much space. In crowded city areas, it might be more important to use the limited space for homes, businesses, or roads. Even though parks are good for fun and mental health, the needs of a growing population and city planning are sometimes more important.
公共公園是好的,但並非每個地方都需要,特別是在空間有限的城市。在擁擠的城市地區,將有限的空間用於住宅、企業或道路可能更為重要。儘管公園對於娛樂和心理健康有益,但人口增長和城市規劃的需求有時更為重要。
While public parks are beneficial, they're not always necessary in every area, particularly in cities where space is at a premium. In densely populated urban areas, utilizing limited space for housing, businesses, or infrastructure might be more crucial. Although parks are important for recreation and mental health, sometimes the practicalities of urban planning and the pressing needs of a growing population take precedence.
公共公園益處良多,但在每個地方並非必需,特別是在空間有限的城市。在人口稠密的城市地區,利用有限空間興建住宅、商業或基礎設施可能更為重要。雖然公園對於休閒和心理健康很重要,但有時城市規劃的實際性和不斷增長人口的迫切需求更為重要。
語法分析
被動語態: "they're not always necessary," 使用被動語態來強調公園的需求性,而非公園本身的特點。 現在分詞作定語: "utilizing limited space," 使用現在分詞作定語來描述空間的使用方式,增加了句子的信息量和動態性。 虛擬語氣: "might be more crucial," 使用虛擬語氣表達可能性和推測,增加了句子的推理和假設性質。
高分詞匯
  • space is at a premium
    空間是唯一的。
  • densely populated
    人口稠密
  • recreation
    娛樂
  • practicalities
    實際情況
  • pressing needs
    迫切需求
  • take precedence
    優先考慮