7 分範例

問題: Do you think we should allow children to make noise in public places?

思路 1

Yes, Within Reason
可以,但要合理。
考官答案
Yes, public places should be open to everyone, including kids who are full of energy. Children express themselves loudly as they grow. It's not realistic to expect them to always be quiet. Accepting their energy in public is not just about being tolerant, but about liking the liveliness they add to life.
是的,公共場所應該對所有人開放,包括充滿活力的孩子們。隨著成長,孩子們會用聲音來表達自己。期望他們總是保持安靜是不現實的。在公共場所接受他們的活力,不僅僅是要包容,還要喜歡他們為生活帶來的活潑氣息。
Absolutely, public spaces ought to be welcoming to all, and that includes the younger ones with their energetic spirits. Children naturally express themselves, often audibly, as a part of their development. It's unrealistic to expect them to be constantly silent. Embracing their liveliness in public areas is not just about tolerance, but about appreciating the vibrancy they bring to our everyday lives.
當然,公共空間應該對所有人都親切友好,這也包括那些充滿活力的年輕人。兒童自然而然地表達自己,往往聲音洪亮,這是他們成長的一部分。期望他們一直保持沈默是不切實際的。在公共區域歡迎並接納他們的活潑是不僅僅是容忍,也是欣賞他們為我們日常生活帶來的活力。
語法分析
被動語態:“ought to be welcoming” 使用被動語態,表明這是一種對公共場所的期望,強調公共場所的特性而不是行為的執行者。 現在分詞作賓補:“express themselves” 使用現在分詞作賓補,描繪孩子們表達自己的方式,增加了句子的複雜性。 現在進行時:“are not just about tolerance” 使用現在進行時表達一個持續的狀態或觀點,即接受孩子們的活力不僅僅是容忍。
高分詞匯
  • energetic spirits
    活力四射
  • express themselves
    表現自己
  • unrealistic
    不切實際
  • embracing
    擁抱
  • vibrancy
    活力

思路 2

No, With Exceptions
不,有例外情況。
考官答案
In public places, respecting others is important, and this means keeping quiet to some extent. It's important to teach kids to be careful about how loud they are in public. This is not only for peace and quiet, but also to teach them respect and thoughtfulness. It's a simple but useful lesson about how their actions affect others, which helps them grow into respectful people in society.
在公共場所,尊重他人是很重要的,這意味著在某種程度上保持安靜。教導孩子在公共場所時要注意自己有多麼大聲是很重要的。這不僅是為了和平與安寧,還是為了教導他們尊重和周到。這是一個簡單但有用的關於他們的行為如何影響他人的教訓,這有助於他們成為社會上受尊重的人。
In public areas, it's crucial to respect others, and that includes maintaining a certain level of quiet. Teaching children to be mindful of their volume in public settings is important. It's not just about keeping the peace; it's about instilling values of respect and consideration. It's a simple yet valuable lesson in understanding how their actions impact others and helps in nurturing them into respectful individuals in society.
在公共場所中,尊重他人是非常重要的,包括保持一定程度的安靜。教導孩子在公共場所注意音量是很重要的。這不僅僅是為了維持和平,也是為了灌輸尊重和考慮他人的價值觀。這是一個簡單但有價值的教訓,讓他們了解自己的行為如何影響他人,有助於培養他們成為社會上受人尊敬的個體。
語法分析
動名詞作主語:"教導孩子們注意" 使用動名詞片語作主語,說明教導孩子們注意音量是一個重要的行動或概念。 現在分詞作定語:"尊重他人" 使用現在分詞"尊重"作定語,描述孩子們成長為怎樣的個體,增加了句子的詳細性和準確性。 現在分詞作賓補:"有助於培育他們" 使用現在分詞作賓補,描述培養孩子們成為尊重他人的個體的過程。
高分詞匯
  • crucial
    關鍵
  • mindful
    細心的
  • volume
    音量
  • instilling
    灌輸
  • consideration
    考慮
  • nurturing
    培養