7 分範例

問題: What should people do to achieve their goals?

思路 1

Goal Setting and Action Planning
目標設定和行動計劃
考官答案
I really believe in being organized and planning the steps to reach a goal. A detailed action plan can make it clear what we need to do to achieve our goals. With so many distractions nowadays, if we don't plan and stay focused on our goals, we might lose focus and our ambitions might get lost in the distractions.
我非常相信組織良好並計劃達成目標的步驟。詳細的行動計劃可以清楚地告訴我們達成目標需要做什麼。如今有這麼多干擾,如果我們不計劃並專注於目標,我們可能會失去重心,把我們的抱負迷失在干擾中。
I'm a great believer in getting organized and planning the steps that are needed to reach a goal. A step-by-step action plan can really clarify what we need to do to get to where we want to be. There are so many distractions today that if we don't do this and keep our eyes on the prize then I feel we lose focus and whatever it was we wanted to achieve gets lost in all the noise.
我非常相信組織良好並計劃實現目標所需的步驟。一個逐步行動計劃真的可以澄清我們需要做什麼才能到達我們想要去的地方。如今有太多的干擾,如果我們不這樣做並保持專注在目標上,那麼我覺得我們會失去焦點,我們想要取得的成就將會消失在所有的噪音中。
語法分析
動名詞:"在組織和計劃方面" 使用動名詞形式來描述行為,增加了句子的流暢性和複雜性。 條件句:"如果我們不這樣做並保持目標" 使用條件句來表達不保持專注可能導致的負面後果,增加了句子的邏輯性和複雜度。 賓語從句:"澄清我們需要做的事情" 使用賓語從句來詳細描述行動計劃的具體內容,提高了語言的準確性和信息量。
高分詞匯
  • a great believer
    一個堅定的信徒
  • step-by-step
    逐步进行
  • clarify
    澄清
  • distraction
    分散注意力
  • keep our eyes on the prize
    專心致志。
  • lost in all the noise
    迷失在所有的噪音中

思路 2

Self-Management and Sustained Motivation
自我管理和持久動力
考官答案
To reach their goals, people need to really focus on self-control and persistence. Self-control means sticking to your path, even when it's hard or you don't feel like it. Persistence means continuing to move forward, no matter how tough it gets. Try your best every day, and don't give up when you face difficulties. Working steadily towards your goals is important for achieving them.
為了達成目標,人們需要真正專注於自我控制和堅持。自我控制意味著堅持自己的道路,即使這很困難或你不想做。堅持意味著繼續向前邁進,無論多麼艱難。每天盡力而為,面對困難時不要放棄。堅持不懈地朝著目標邁進對於實現目標至關重要。
To achieve their goals, people really need to focus on self-discipline and perseverance. Self-discipline is all about staying on your path, even when it's tough or you're not in the mood. Perseverance is about keeping on going, no matter how hard things get. Just do your best every day, and don't quit when facing challenges. Steadily working towards your goals is the key to achieving them.
為了實現他們的目標,人們真的需要專注於自律和毅力。自律就是要堅持自己的道路,即使在困難或不想做的時候也要堅持。毅力是要持續向前,無論有多困難。每天做到最好,面對挑戰時不要輕易放棄。持之以恆朝著目標努力是實現目標的關鍵。
語法分析
動名詞:"在組織和計劃方面" 使用動名詞形式來描述行為,增加了句子的流暢性和複雜性。 條件句:"如果我們不這樣做並保持目標" 使用條件句來表達不保持專注可能導致的負面後果,增加了句子的邏輯性和複雜度。 賓語從句:"澄清我們需要做的事情" 使用賓語從句來詳細描述行動計劃的具體內容,提高了語言的準確性和信息量。
高分詞匯
  • self-discipline
    自律
  • perseverance
    毅力
  • tough
    堅強
  • mood
    情緒
  • challenges
    挑戰
  • steadily
    穩定地
  • working towards
    朝著目標前進