7 分範例

問題: Do you think technology makes travelling more difficult?

思路 1

Yes, Makes It More Difficult
讓事情變得更困難。
考官答案
Yes, technology can make travel harder in some ways. Relying too much on things like GPS and online reviews can make us less independent. People might not experience the fun of finding new places by themselves or the feeling of navigating a new place without always looking at their phones.
是的,科技在某些方面確實會使旅行變得更困難。過分依賴GPS和線上評論等工具可能讓我們變得不夠獨立。人們可能會少了自己發現新地點的樂趣,或是在不總是盯著手機的情況下導航新地方的感覺。
Yes, in some ways, technology does make travelling more challenging. The overreliance on tech tools, like GPS and online reviews, can reduce our self-reliance. People often miss out on the joys of spontaneous discovery or the satisfaction of navigating a new place on their own because they're glued to their screens.
是的,在某些方面,科技確實使旅行變得更加具有挑戰性。對於 GPS 和線上評論等科技工具的過度依賴可能減少我們的自主能力。人們常常因為盯著屏幕而錯過了那種即興發現的快樂,或是在新地方尋路時的滿足感。
語法分析
動名詞短語:"過度依賴科技工具" 使用動名詞短語作主語,描述對科技工具過度依賴的行為,增加了句子的動態性。 過去分詞作定語:"全神貫注在他們的螢幕上" 使用過去分詞作定語來形容人們的行為,表現出對螢幕的過分專注,增加了句子的描述性和深度。 被動語態:"可能被忽略掉" 使用被動語態來描述可能錯過的經歷,強調了行為的結果而非行動者。
高分詞匯
  • challenging
    挑戰性
  • overreliance
    過度依賴
  • tech tools
    科技工具
  • online reviews
    線上評論
  • self-reliance
    自力更生
  • spontaneous discovery
    自發性的發現
  • glued to
    黏在

思路 2

NNo, Simplifies Travelling
不,簡化旅行
考官答案
No, I think technology has made traveling easier. Planning and booking trips is much simpler with apps and websites. You can look at prices, check reviews, and book flights and hotels quickly. This makes things much more convenient, saving time and trouble, and it makes traveling easier and more fun.
不,我認為科技讓旅行變得更容易。使用應用程式和網站規劃和訂購旅行要簡單得多。您可以查看價格、檢查評論,並快速預訂航班和酒店。這讓事情變得更方便、節省時間和麻煩,也使旅行變得更輕鬆和有趣。
No, I reckon technology has actually simplified travelling. It's much easier now to plan and book trips with apps and websites. You can compare prices, read reviews, and book everything from flights to accommodations in just a few clicks. This convenience saves a lot of time and hassle, making travel more accessible and enjoyable.
不,我認為科技實際上簡化了旅行。現在使用應用程式和網站計畫和預訂旅行要容易得多。您可以比較價格、閱讀評論,並且僅需幾個點擊就可以從航班到住宿預訂所有事情。這種便利節省了很多時間和麻煩,讓旅行更加方便和愉快。
語法分析
現在分詞作定語:"比較價格,閱讀評論" 使用現在分詞 作定語來描述在應用程式和網站上進行的具體活動,如比較價格和閱讀評論,增加了句子的描述性和細節。 簡單過去時:"made traveling easier" 使用簡單過去時來描述科技對旅行的影響,強調了改變已經發生。 不定式片語:"規劃和預訂旅行" 使用不定式片語來表達科技使得旅行規劃和預訂的目的,突出了科技的功能和效果。
高分詞匯
  • technology
    科技
  • simplified
    簡化
  • plan and book trips
    計畫並預訂旅行。
  • compare prices
    比較價格
  • read reviews
    閱讀評論
  • convenience
    便利
  • saves time and hassle
    節省時間和麻煩
  • accessible and enjoyable
    輕鬆且愉快