7 分範例

問題: Who should teach teenagers skills?

思路 1

Parents and Family
父母和家人
考官答案
In my opinion, it comes from the family. Children often imitate their parents, whether they want to or not. Parents should set a good example and be good role models. You can usually tell when young people have been taught well by their family because they seem more capable and grounded.
在我看來,這來自於家庭。孩子們經常會模仿他們的父母,無論他們是否想這樣。父母應該树立良好榜样,成为好的榜样。通常可以看出,當年輕人受到家庭良好教育時,因為他們似乎更有能力和穩重。
​It has to come from the family in my view. Children tend to be a carbon copy of their parents to a degree, whether they like it or not, and it’s down to the parents to set a good example and be a solid role model. It’s often very easy to spot the young people whose family have taught them a lot as they are just more capable and grounded.
在我看來,這必須來自家庭。孩子往往在某種程度上是父母的翻版,不管他們是否喜歡,這取決於父母是否樹立良好的榜樣並成為穩健的榜樣。通常很容易辨認出那些家庭教育孩子很多的年輕人,因為他們更有能力和穩固。
語法分析
條件句:"不論他們喜不喜歡"這個條件句強調了孩子們模仿父母的普遍性,增加了句子的深度和普遍性。 被動語態:"成為一個堅實的榜樣"使用被動語態強調父母作為榜樣的責任,增加了句子的客觀性和深度。 現在分詞作形容詞:"有能力且穩重"使用現在分詞作為形容詞描述年輕人的特質,增強了句子的描述力和準確性。
高分詞匯
  • a carbon copy
    一份副本
  • to a degree
    在某種程度上
  • a solid role model
    一個堅強的榜樣
  • capable
    有能力
  • grounded
    停機-

思路 2

Educators and Schools
教育者和學校
考官答案
These days, many parents are too busy to teach their children skills, so schools and teachers play a crucial role. Additionally, there are 21st-century skills like digital literacy that are best taught by qualified teachers. Learning from professionals is more efficient, and it can lead to fewer conflicts at home.
這些天,許多父母太忙了,沒時間教孩子技能,所以學校和老師扮演著至關重要的角色。此外,21世紀的技能,例如數位素養,最好由合格的老師來教授。從專業人士學習更有效率,也可以減少家庭衝突。
I think that nowadays, a lot of parents are too busy to actively teach their children skills and so it is left to the school and teachers. There are also a lot of 21st century skills like digital literacy that only teachers are qualified to teach, and so it’s just more efficient to learn from professionals, and this definitely leads to fewer conflicts in the home too
我認為現今許多父母都太忙碌,無法積極地教育他們的孩子技能,因此這項工作留給學校和老師。此外,還有許多21世紀的技能,如數位素養,只有老師有資格教導,因此從專業人士那裡學習會更有效率,同時也絕對會減少家中的衝突。
語法分析
副詞修飾動詞:"太忙以致無法積極教導" 使用副詞修飾動詞 "teach",強調父母沒有足夠的時間積極地教授孩子,增加了句子的描述力和細節。 並列句:"因此學校和老師扮演著關鍵角色" 使用並列句結構,表明學校和老師都在教育中扮演關鍵角色,增加了句子的信息量和邏輯性。 定語從句:"由合格老師教授最好的技能" 使用定語從句修飾 "21世紀技能",詳細說明哪些技能最適合由合格老師教授,增強了句子的複雜性和信息量。
高分詞匯
  • actively
    積極地
  • is left to
    尚待左辦理
  • digital literacy
    數位素養
  • qualified
    符合資格
  • efficient
    高效
  • fewer conflicts
    更少的衝突