7 分範例

問題: What important skills should a child learn?

思路 1

Social and Emotional Skills
社交和情感技能
考官答案
I think empathy and understanding are often forgotten. These skills are important for children to fit in. Understanding how someone else feels, even about things we think are small, is an important emotional skill. It helps children make friends and get along well with others.
我認為同理心和理解經常被遺忘。這些技能對於孩子融入是很重要。理解別人的感受,即使是我們認為微不足道的事情,是一項重要的情感技能。它有助於孩子交朋友並與他人相處融洽。
Something that I think is often overlooked is empat​hy and understanding. These are skills that unless learned, will make it very difficult for children to fit in. Being able to understand how someone else feels about something that we may believe to be trivial is an emotional skill that will put every child in good stead and help them make friends.
我認為常常被忽略的是同理心和理解。這些技能是必須學習的,否則孩子們將很難融入。能夠理解別人對我們認為微不足道的事情感受,是一種情感技能,將幫助每個孩子建立良好的關係並幫助他們交朋友。
語法分析
被動語態:"are often overlooked" 這個表達使用了被動語態,強調了這些技能被忽視的情況,而不是忽視它們的人,增加了句子的深度和客觀性。 條件句:"unless learned, will make it very difficult" 這個條件句強調了如果這些技能沒有被學會,孩子們融入社會的困難,增加了邏輯性和情境描述。
高分詞匯
  • overlook
    俯瞰
  • empathy
    同理心
  • put every child in good stead
    讓每個孩子處於良好狀態
  • emotional skill
    情感技巧
  • fit in
    適應

思路 2

Practical Life Skills
實用生活技能
考官答案
I think it's important for children to learn about money. Parents and teachers often don't teach this, which is odd because it's a big part of life. Understanding the true cost of things and how to save money are skills that will be very useful when children start living on their own.
我認為讓孩子學習金錢的重要性。父母和老師通常沒有教這個,這很奇怪,因為這是生活的一大部分。了解事物的真實成本以及如何節省金錢是孩子們開始獨立生活時非常有用的技能。
Personally, I believe that children should be taught about money. It’s something that parents and teachers don’t do, which is strange considering that it’s an important part of life. Learning the real cost of something and how to save are life skills that will be invaluable when they leave home and start to live independently.
個人認為應該教導孩子有關金錢的事情。這是父母和老師沒有做到的事情,這很奇怪,考慮到這是生活中重要的一部分。了解東西的實際成本以及如何儲蓄是生活技能,在他們離家獨立生活時將會是無價的。
語法分析
被動語態: "應該教授金錢知識" 這個表達使用了被動語態,強調金錢知識的教育是應該被實施的,而不是具體實施者,增加了句子的客觀性和深度。 條件句: "當他們離家獨立生活時" 這個條件句描述了孩子們獨立生活的時機,說明了學習金錢管理技能的重要性,增加了邏輯性和情境描述。 現在分詞作狀語: "學習某物的真實成本" 使用現在分詞作為狀語,描述了金錢教育的具體內容,使句子更具體和生動。
高分詞匯
  • strange
    奇怪
  • considering
    考慮
  • the real cost of something
    某事物的實際成本
  • invaluable
    無價的
  • independently
    獨立地