7 分範例

問題: Do people go outdoors more or less now than in the past?

思路 1

Yes, More Now
現在更多
考官答案
Yes, I've noticed that more people are doing outdoor activities now. There is more understanding about how being active is good for health and living a healthy life. This stronger focus on health is making more people take part in outdoor activities such as running, biking, and hiking. They do it not only for physical health but also for mental health.
是的,我注意到現在有更多人在進行戶外活動。人們對於積極健康生活的重要性有更深的了解。這種對健康的強烈關注使得更多人參加跑步、騎自行車和遠足等戶外活動。他們這樣做不僅是為了身體健康,也是為了心理健康。
Yes, I have realized that there are more people enjoying outdoor activities these days. There's a growing awareness about the benefits of being active and maintaining a healthy lifestyle. This increased health consciousness is driving more individuals to engage in outdoor activities like jogging, biking, and hiking, not just for fitness but also for mental well-being.
我已经意识到最近有更多人喜欢户外活动。关于积极参与并保持健康生活方式的好处有更多人意识到。这种增加的健康意识正在驱使更多人参与慢跑、骑自行车和徒步等户外活动,不仅是为了健身,也是为了心理健康。
語法分析
正在進行時:「正在享受」使用現在進行時態來表達人們正在享受戶外活動的持續性行為。 現在分詞短語:「保持活躍」使用現在分詞短語來描述活躍生活方式的重要性。 形容詞短語:「增加的健康意識」使用形容詞短語來描述人們健康意識的提高,增加了句子的描述性和重點。
高分詞匯
  • outdoor activities
    戶外活動
  • growing awareness
    增加的意識
  • healthy lifestyle
    健康的生活方式
  • increased health consciousness
    增加了健康意識
  • jogging
    慢跑
  • mental well-being
    心理健康

思路 2

No, Less Now
不,現在少點。
考官答案
Actually, people are spending less time outside nowadays. Digital entertainment, such as streaming and video games, is keeping many people inside. Our generation often spends more time looking at screens. The ease and variety of digital content means people can have fun without going out, which might lead to less time spent on outdoor activities.
現在人們在外面花的時間越來越少。流媒體和電子遊戲等數位娛樂讓許多人宅在家裡。我們這一代通常會花更多時間看螢幕。數位內容的便利性和多樣性意味著人們可以在家裡玩得開心,這可能導致在戶外活動上花費的時間減少。
As a matter of fact, there's a trend of people spending less time outdoors now. The rise of digital entertainment, like streaming services and video games, keeps many indoors. People of our age tend to spend more time on screen. The convenience and variety of digital content available make it easy for people to get entertainment without leaving their homes, which could be reducing the overall time spent in outdoor activities.
事實上,現在有人在戶外花的時間越來越少。數位娛樂的崛起,像是串流服務和電子遊戲,讓許多人宅在家裡。我們這個年代的人傾向於在螢幕上花更多時間。數位內容的便利性和多樣性讓人們容易在不離開家的情況下就可以得到娛樂,這可能會降低室外活動的總時間。
語法分析
現在進行時: "people are spending less time" 使用現在進行時態表達人們減少戶外活動時間的當前趨勢。 現在分詞作定語: "digital entertainment" 使用現在分詞“digital”作定語,描述娛樂形式的特點,即以數字形式存在。 形容詞短語: "the ease and variety" 使用形容詞短語來描述數字內容的特點,即便利和多樣,增加了句子的描述性和細節。 賓語從句: "make it easy for people to get entertainment" 使用賓語從句來說明數字娛樂的影響,即讓人們更容易在家獲得娛樂,增加了句子的邏輯性和連貫性。
高分詞匯
  • trend
    趨勢
  • outdoors
    戶外
  • digital entertainment
    數位娛樂
  • streaming services
    串流服務
  • video games
    電玩遊戲