7 分範例

問題: What extra facilities are there at tourist attractions in your country?

思路 1

Accommodation and Dining
住宿和用餐
考官答案
Nowadays, many tourist attractions have hotels nearby, so tourists can stay overnight. Theme parks, especially, often have themed hotels designed for families. These hotels can be expensive, but they allow people from all over the country to enjoy the attractions without the hassle of traveling back home the same day.
現在許多旅遊景點附近都有酒店,因此遊客可以過夜。特別是主題公園,通常會有專為家庭而設計的主題酒店。這些酒店可能很昂貴,但它們讓來自全國各地的人們能夠盡情享受景點,而不必當天返回家中。
A lot of tourist attractions these days have hotels connected to them so tourists can stay over. Places like theme parks in particular have themed hotels that are specifically aimed at families. They cost quite a bit but it means that people from all over the country can come and experience what there is to offer there without the added hassle of having to go all the way home.
現在很多觀光景點都有連接的飯店,讓遊客可以留宿。特別是主題樂園等地方,有針對家庭的主題飯店。它們價格很高,但這意味著來自全國各地的人們可以前來體驗,而不必因要回家而產生額外麻煩。
語法分析
現在分詞作定語:"having hotels connected to them" 使用現在分詞作定語,描述了酒店與旅遊景點的緊密連接,增強了句子的信息量和描述性。 目的狀語從句:"so tourists can stay over" 使用目的狀語從句來解釋酒店存在的目的,即方便遊客過夜。 條件狀語從句:"without the added hassle of having to go all the way home" 使用條件狀語從句來描述住宿的好處,即減少返程的麻煩,突出了旅遊住宿的便利性。
高分詞匯
  • connected
    連接
  • stay over
    留宿
  • themed hotels
    主題酒店
  • specially aimed at
    特別針對
  • quite a bit
    相當多
  • offer
    提議
  • hassle
    麻煩

思路 2

Entertainment and Leisure
娛樂與休閒
考官答案
In my country, every tourist attraction has a souvenir shop. They are found everywhere and offer a wide variety of local products. It's an excellent opportunity for locals to showcase their crafts and produce. These shops also give them a source of income they might not have otherwise.
在我的國家,每個旅遊景點都有一家紀念品商店。它們隨處可見,並提供各種當地產品。這是一個絕佳的機會,讓當地人展示他們的手工藝品和產品。這些商店也為他們提供了一種否則可能沒有的收入來源。
We can’t go to any tourist attraction in my country without seeing a souvenir shop. They are everywhere and sell a huge range of local goods. It’s a great way for the local people to be able to show off local crafts and produce and it provides the locals with a source of income that they wouldn’t necessarily have otherwise.
我們在我的國家不能去任何旅遊景點而不看到紀念品店。這些店隨處可見,販賣各種當地商品。這是當地人展示本地手工藝品和農產品的好方法,也為他們提供了一個否則可能沒有的收入來源。
語法分析
現在分詞作定語:"販售各種當地商品" 使用現在分詞作定語,描述紀念品商店的特點和提供的商品種類,增加了句子的詳細信息。 被動語態:"被展示" 使用被動語態來強調當地人展示手工藝品和產品的機會,表明這是由紀念品商店提供的機會。
高分詞匯
  • souvenir
    紀念品
  • huge
    巨大
  • show off  local crafts
    展示當地工藝品
  • produce
    生產
  • provide
    提供
  • a source of income
    一個收入來源
  • otherwise
    否則