7 分範例

問題: Are tourist attractions in the countryside more popular than those in the cities?

思路 1

Yes, Countryside Attractions Are More Welcome
鄉村景點更受歡迎
考官答案
Yes, I agree. Countryside attractions are more peaceful because the number of visitors is controlled, so they don't become too crowded. They are also connected to the natural environment, making them more beautiful. In contrast, city tourist spots are often very crowded and can be stressful to visit.
是的,我同意。鄉村景點較為寧靜,因為參觀人數受控制,不會變得太擁擠。它們也與自然環境連接,更加美麗。相較之下,城市旅遊景點通常人潮眾多,造訪時可能會感到壓力。
Yes, I think so. They are just more peaceful and as visitor numbers are controlled so these kinds of places don’t get overcrowded. They are also linked to the natural environment around them so they are much more aesthetically pleasing. As cities have so many people in them, every tourist attraction is absolutely packed, and are stressful places to visit.
是的,我認為是這樣。它們更加寧靜,遊客數量受控制,因此這類地方不會過於擁擠。它們也與周圍的自然環境相連,因此更具美感。由於城市中有這麼多人,每個旅遊景點都非常擁擠,是令人感到壓力的地方參觀。
語法分析
被動語態:"訪客數量受控" 使用被動語態表明遊客數量的控制是由外部因素引起的,增加了句子的準確性和邏輯性。 比較級:"更加平和" 和 "更加美觀" 使用比較級來強調鄉村景點與城市景點在寧靜和美觀方面的差異,清晰地表達了兩者之間的對比。
高分詞匯
  • controlled
    受控制
  • overcrowded
    擁擠
  • natural environment
    自然環境
  • aesthetically pleasing
    外觀美觀
  • packed
    填滿
  • stressful
    繁重壓力

思路 2

No, City Attractions Are Equally or More Popular
不,城市景點同樣或更受歡迎。
考官答案
No, I don't think so. City attractions are more conveniently accessible as we don't need a car to reach them, making them more popular. The infrastructure in the countryside often makes it hard to get to places without a car, and it can take a long time to reach them. This is why attractions in the city are usually busier.
我不這麼認為。城市景點更容易接觸,因為我們不需要汽車去到,因此更受歡迎。鄉村地區的基礎設施通常很難沒有汽車到達某些地方,而且到達這些地方可能需要很長時間。這就是為什麼城市景點通常比較熱鬧。
No, I don’t think that’s the case really. Attractions in the city have much more convenient access in that we don’t need a car to get to them, and this makes them more popular. The infrastructure in the countryside doesn’t always allow us to get to these places very easily and so, unless we drive, it takes an age to get there. This is why city attractions are often busier.
不,我並不認為真的是這樣。城市中的景點更容易到達,我們不需要汽車,這使得它們更受歡迎。鄉村地區的基礎建設並不總是允許我們輕鬆到達這些地方,所以除非我們開車,否則到那裡需要很長時間。這就是為什麼城市的景點通常比較熱鬧。
語法分析
比較級:"更方便" 和 "更繁忙" 使用比較級來強調城市景點相對於鄉村景點在方便性和繁忙程度上的差異。 現在分詞作原因狀語:"in that we don’t need a car to get to them" 使用現在分詞作原因狀語,解釋了城市景點受歡迎的原因,即交通方便。 條件狀語從句:"unless we drive" 使用條件狀語從句指出鄉村景點訪問的限制,即如果不開車就難以到達,強調了鄉村景點的不便之處。
高分詞匯
  • convenient access
    方便使用
  • infrastructure
    基礎設施
  • allow
    允許
  • unless
    除非
  • an age
    一個時代