7 分範例

問題: What activities do people do in their free time?

思路 1

Entertainment and Relaxation
娛樂和放鬆
考官答案
There are many ways to entertain ourselves now. One popular way, especially for certain ages, is playing video games. The video games industry is very big and makes a lot of money because of so many players. Online gaming has also changed how people play games and is growing.
現在我們娛樂自己的方式有很多種。一種流行的方式,尤其是對於某些年齡層來說,就是玩視頻遊戲。由於有很多玩家,視頻遊戲行業非常龐大且賺錢。線上遊戲也改變了人們玩遊戲的方式,並且不斷增長。
There’s a huge range of ways to entertain ourselves these days. I suppose one of the most popular, depending on our age, is playing video games. The video games industry is enormous and generates billions of dollars these days due to the number of players that are out there now. Online gaming has changed the way people play games too and this is an area of growth.
現在我們有許多方法娛樂自己。我想其中一種最受歡迎的,取決於我們的年齡,就是玩電子遊戲。電子遊戲產業是巨大的,如今因為眾多玩家的存在而創造了數十億美元的收入。線上遊戲也改變了人們玩遊戲的方式,這是一個成長的領域。
語法分析
條件狀語從句:"depending on our age" 使用條件狀語從句來指出特定條件下的情況,即年齡對於選擇娛樂方式的影響。 現在進行時:"is playing" 和 "is growing" 使用現在進行時,表示正在發生或發展中的趨勢或活動,增加了句子的即時性和動態性。 被動語態:"is changed" 使用被動語態來描述在線遊戲如何影響了遊戲方式,強調了在線遊戲作為主動者對遊戲習慣的影響。
高分詞匯
  • huge
    巨大
  • enormous
    巨大
  • generates
    生成
  • are out there
    在那裡
  • growth
    成長

思路 2

Learning and Personal Development
學習與個人發展
考官答案
With the internet, people are learning new things by themselves. Many people take online courses in their spare time to get new skills or learn languages. I see a lot of people using language learning apps on their phones, which are like games and quite attractive. The advantage is that we can learn anytime we have free time.
有了互聯網,人們可以自己學習新知識。很多人利用空閒時間上網課程來獲得新技能或學習語言。我看到很多人在他們的手機上使用語言學習應用程式,這些應用程式像遊戲一樣,非常吸引人。這樣做的好處是我們可以在有空閒時間的時候學習。
With internet access, people are taking it upon themselves to learn new things. Millions now do online courses in their free time to either upskill or learn a new language. I see so many people learning languages on apps on their phones and they are presented in a game-like style which is really attractive. The benefit is that we can do this whenever we have some free time.
有了互聯網,人們紛紛自行學習新事物。現在有數百萬人在空閒時間上網課程,要麼提升技能,要麼學習一門新語言。我看到很多人在手機上的應用程式上學習語言,並以遊戲方式呈現,非常吸引人。好處在於我們可以在有空閒時間時隨時進行。
語法分析
動名詞片語:"學習新事物" 使用動名詞片語作為主語,描述人們通過互聯網進行的活動,增加了句子的動態性。 條件狀語從句:"每當我們有空閒時間時" 使用條件狀語從句來設定學習的可能時機,強調了學習的靈活性。 被動語態:"被呈現" 使用被動語態來描述應用程式如何展示語言學習,強調了應用程式的作用。
高分詞匯
  • taking it upon themselves
    自行承擔
  • upskill
    提升技能
  • presented
    呈現
  • game-like style
    遊戲風格
  • attractive
    有吸引力
  • benefit
    好處