7 分範例

問題: Do you like swimming?

思路 1

Yes
考官答案
Yes, I like swimming. I learned to swim when I was a child, so I feel comfortable in the water. I think it’s a good way to exercise and I always feel relaxed after swimming, especially in summer.
是的,我喜歡游泳。我小時候學會游泳,所以我在水中感覺很自在。我認為這是一種很好的運動方式,游泳後我總是感到輕鬆,特別是在夏天。
Yes, I really enjoy swimming. I actually learned how to swim when I was quite young, so I feel completely at ease in the water. For me, it’s not only an excellent way to stay healthy, but it also helps me relax and cool down, especially during the hot summer months. I often go swimming with friends, and it’s always a fun and refreshing experience.
是的,我真的很喜歡游泳。我其實是在很小的時候學會游泳的,所以我在水中感覺非常自在。對我來說,這不僅是保持健康的極好方式,還幫助我放鬆和降溫,特別是在炎熱的夏季。我經常和朋友一起去游泳,這總是一次有趣且令人精神煥發的體驗。
語法分析
1. 複合句:答案使用了帶有連接詞如「so」和「not only...but also」的複合句,顯示出較高的語法範圍和準確性。 2. 過去簡單式與現在簡單式:答案正確地在過去簡單式(「I actually learned」)描述過去事件與現在簡單式(「I really enjoy」、「I often go」)描述當前習慣和喜好之間切換。 3. 副詞的使用:副詞「completely」用來修飾「at ease」,顯示表達的精確性。
高分詞匯
  • completely at ease in the water
    在水中完全自如
  • excellent way to stay healthy
    保持健康的絕佳方法
  • relax and cool down
    放鬆並冷靜下來
  • hot summer months
    炎熱的夏季月分
  • fun and refreshing experience
    有趣且令人耳目一新的體驗

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I don’t really like swimming. I’m not very confident in the water and I get nervous if it’s too deep. Also, I don’t like the smell of chlorine in pools, so I prefer other sports like running.
不,我其實不太喜歡游泳。我對水沒有太多自信,如果水太深我會感到緊張。此外,我不喜歡游泳池中的氯味,所以我較喜歡其他運動,比如跑步。
To be honest, I’m not a big fan of swimming. I’ve never been a confident swimmer and I tend to feel quite anxious in deep water. On top of that, I don’t really enjoy the strong smell of chlorine in most swimming pools, so I usually prefer to do other activities like running or cycling instead.
說實話,我不是很喜歡游泳。我從來不是一個自信的游泳者,且在深水中常常感到焦慮。除此之外,我也不太喜歡大多數游泳池中濃烈的氯氣味,所以我通常更喜歡跑步或騎自行車等其他活動。
語法分析
1. 現在完成式的使用:「I’ve never been a confident swimmer」使用現在完成式來描述至今為止的生活經驗,顯示出對時態使用的良好掌握。 2. 連接詞短語的使用:「On top of that」用來添加另一個原因,「so」引出結果,兩者都有助於清晰且有邏輯地組織想法。 3. 情態動詞的使用:「tend to feel」使用情態短語來表達一般傾向,為答案增添細微差別。
高分詞匯
  • confident swimmer
    自信的游泳者
  • anxious in deep water
    身陷深水感到焦慮
  • strong smell of chlorine
    強烈的氯氣味
  • on top of that
    除此之外
  • prefer to do other activities
    偏好從事其他活動

思路 3

Sometimes/It Depends
有時候/視情況而定
考官答案
Sometimes I like swimming, but it depends. I usually enjoy it when the weather is hot or when I’m on vacation at the beach. But I don’t swim very often during the rest of the year.
有時我喜歡游泳,但這要視情況而定。通常在天氣炎熱或我在海灘度假的時候,我會很享受游泳。但在其他時間,我不常游泳。
I would say it depends. I really enjoy swimming when I’m on holiday, especially at the beach or when the weather is really warm. However, I don’t swim regularly throughout the year, as I tend to get busy with other things and I’m not as motivated to go swimming in the winter months.
我會說這取決於情況。我真的很喜歡在度假時游泳,特別是在海灘或天氣非常溫暖的時候。然而,我並不是全年都會定期游泳,因為我往往會忙於其他事情,而且在冬天的幾個月裡,我沒有那麼多動力去游泳。
語法分析
1. 條件片語:「I would say it depends.」這句話展示了使用情態動詞來表達不確定性或意見靈活性的能力。 2. 對比結構:「However」的使用引入了對比的觀點,展示了邏輯組織想法的能力。 3. 現在進行式與現在簡單式:「I’m on holiday」(現在進行式用於暫時的情況)、「I don’t swim regularly」(現在簡單式用於習慣)。
高分詞匯
  • it depends
    這取決於
  • especially
    尤其
  • regularly
    定期地
  • tend to get busy
    往往會變得忙碌
  • motivated
    有動力的
  • winter months
    冬季月份