7 分範例

問題: Do you want to make your dreams come true?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, I want to make my dreams come true because it makes me feel good and gives me a reason to keep going. I have some goals that I'm really excited about, and I try to work on them every day.
是的,我想讓我的夢想成真,因為這讓我感覺良好,並給了我繼續前進的理由。我有一些我非常期待的目標,我每天都努力實現它們。
Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true as it gives me a sense of fulfillment and purpose. I have specific goals that I am passionate about and work towards every day. Achieving these dreams can lead to personal growth and happiness, and they motivate me to keep moving forward in life.
是的,我絕對想實現我的夢想,因為這給了我滿足感和目標感。我有具體的目標,我對它們充滿熱情並每天努力去實現。實現這些夢想可以促進個人成長和幸福,並激勵我在生活中不斷前進。
語法分析
1. 不定詞片語的用法:「實現我的夢想」和「繼續向前走」是用來表達目的或意圖的不定詞片語的例子。 2. 現在簡單時態的使用:這個回答使用現在簡單時態(「給予」、「擁有」、「工作」、「激勵」)來描述一般真理和習慣性行動,這對於表達持續的渴望和行動是適當的。
高分詞匯
  • fulfillment and purpose
    實現與目的
  • specific goals
    具體目標
  • passionate about
    熱衷於
  • personal growth and happiness
    個人成長與幸福
  • motivate me to keep moving forward
    激勵我繼續向前邁進

思路 2

No
考官答案
No, I don't always want to make my dreams come true because sometimes they change. I like to enjoy life as it happens and not worry too much about the future.
不,我並不總是希望我的夢想成真,因為有時它們會改變。我喜歡享受生活的當下,而不是過度擔心未來。
No, I don't always want to make my dreams come true because sometimes dreams change over time, and what I wanted before might not be what I want now. I prefer to live in the moment and enjoy life as it comes. I focus more on enjoying the journey rather than just the end goal, as dreams can sometimes lead to disappointment if they don't come true.
不,我並不總是想要實現我的夢想,因為有時候夢想會隨著時間而改變,而我之前想要的可能不是我現在想要的。我更傾向於活在當下,享受生活的每一刻。我更加關注享受旅程,而不僅僅是最終目標,因為如果夢想無法實現,有時會帶來失望。
語法分析
1. 條件句: "我之前想要的可能不再是我現在想要的" 使用條件結構來表達假設情況,顯示出使用複雜句型的能力。 2. 對比連接詞: "而是" 被用來對比兩個不同的想法,顯示出表達細微思考的能力。
高分詞匯
  • change over time
    隨著時間的變遷
  • live in the moment
    活在當下
  • enjoying the journey
    享受旅程
  • disappointment
    失望