7 分範例

問題: ls it necessary to give advice to children?

思路 1

Yes, it is
是的,這樣就好。
考官答案
Definitely. Young people need guidance to handle life's challenges. We go through a lot, and when we're young, it's hard to know how to deal with everything. This sometimes leads to bad decisions. Without someone to guide us, it's difficult to make good choices.
年輕人需要指導來應對生活的挑戰。 我們經歷了很多事情,當我們年輕時,很難知道如何應對一切。 這有時會導致做出錯誤的決定。 沒有人來引導我們,很難做出正確的選擇。
Absolutley. They need help navigating the challenges that they are going to face in life. We experience so many different things in life and when we are young, we just don’t know how to deal with some of them so sometimes this leads us into making some dodgy decisions. If there’s no one to guide us when we face these problems then it’s hard to make the right choice.
絕對。他們需要幫助應對生活中將面臨的挑戰。在生活中我們會經歷很多不同的事情,當我們年輕的時候,有些事情我們不知道該如何應對,這有時會導致我們做出一些不明智的決定。如果沒有人在我們面臨這些問題時給我們指引,則很難做出正確的選擇。
語法分析
現在分詞作狀語: "navigating the challenges" 這個短語使用現在分詞作為狀語,描述需要幫助的動作,增加了句子的複雜性。 過去分詞作賓補: "leads us into making some dodgy decisions" 這個表達使用了過去分詞作為賓語補語,說明了錯誤決策的後果,展示了語言的準確性和複雜性。 條件句: "If there's no one to guide us" 使用條件句來表達指導缺失的可能後果,增加了句子的邏輯性和複雜度。
高分詞匯
  • navigating
    導航
  • challenge
    挑戰
  • face
  • deal with
    處理
  • dodgy
    可疑
  • guide
    指南

思路 2

No, not always
不,不總是
考官答案
No, not always. I believe children should sometimes make their own mistakes to learn from them. It helps them become more independent and self-reliant. If someone is always advising them and telling them what to do, they might become indecisive and unable to function without others' support when that person is no longer there.
不,並非總是如此。我認為孩子有時候應該犯錯並從中學習。這有助於他們變得更加獨立和自立。如果有人一直給他們建議並告訴他們該怎麼做,他們可能變得優柔寡斷,當那個人不在身邊時便無法獨立行事。
No, not always. I think children sometimes need to make their own mistakes so they can learn from them. This makes them more independent and self-reliant. If there is someone to advise them all the time and tell them what to do, then they are going to be indecisive when that person isn’t around anymore and unable to function without the support of other people.
不,不一定。 我認為有時候孩子需要犯錯誤才能從中學習。這能讓他們變得更獨立和自立。如果總有人一直給他們建議並告訴他們該做什麼,那麼當這個人不在身邊時,他們會變得猶豫不決,無法在沒有他人支持的情況下運作。
語法分析
「如果一直有人指导他們」這個條件句描述了一直有人指導的情況,以及它可能導致的依賴性,增加了句子的邏輯性和複雜度。 「讓他們犯錯」使用反身代詞「their own」強調了孩子們需要自己犯錯,突出了個人責任和自主性。 「徬徨不定」和「無法正常運作」這兩個現在分詞作為主語使用,描述了沒有指導時可能出現的狀態,增加了句子的複雜性和深度。
高分詞匯
  • make their own mistake
    犯自己的錯誤
  • independent
    獨立
  • self-reliant
    自力更生
  • advise
    建議
  • indecisive
    優柔寡斷
  • function
    功能
  • support
    支援