7 分範例

問題: What goals do people at your at age have?

思路 1

Educational and Career Goals
教育和職業目標
考官答案
Honestly, most people focus on education or career goals. We learn from a young age that education leads to a better life. So, many of my friends work hard to get qualifications to improve their job prospects. I think the more professional skills we have, the easier it is to move forward in our careers.
老實說,大多數人專注於教育或職業目標。我們從小就學習到教育能夠帶來更好的生活。所以,很多我的朋友努力學習取得資格,以改善他們的工作前景。我認為我們擁有的專業技能越多,事業就越容易向前發展。
Most people are looking at educational or career goals to be honest. It’s drilled into us from an early age that education is the key to a better life and so a lot of my peers are really focused on getting qualifications so they can get a better position when they enter the world of work. I suppose the more professional skills we have, the easier it is to advance.
大多數人誠實地看待教育或職業目標。從小就被灌輸教育是通往更好生活的關鍵,所以我許多同輩都非常專注於取得資格,以便在進入工作領域時能獲得更好的職位。我想我們擁有的專業技能越多,晉升就會越容易。
語法分析
被動語態:「這是被灌輸給我們的」 條件句:「我們擁有的專業技能越多,晉升就越容易」
高分詞匯
  • educational
    教育
  • career goal
    職業目標
  • drilled into
    鑽進
  • key
    密鑰
  • qualification
    資格
  • the world of work
    工作的世界

思路 2

Personal Achievements and Experiences
個人成就和經驗
考官答案
Right now, many of my friends are interested in traveling and experiencing new cultures. Since we're young and don't have many responsibilities like a job or family, traveling seems like a top priority. We think that if we don't travel now, we might not get the chance in the future.
現在,我許多朋友都對旅行和體驗新文化很感興趣。由於我們年輕,沒有像工作或家庭這樣的責任,旅行似乎是最重要的事情。我們認為如果現在不去旅行,將來可能就沒有機會了。
Most of my peers are focused on traveling or exploring new cultures at the moment. As we are young, we haven’t got a lot of responsibilities like a job or family to tie us to one place so traveling while we have the chance seems to be the priority. I think most of us are aware that if we don’t do it now, we’ll never have the chance to do it in the future.
大多數我的同儕目前都專注於旅行或探索新文化。因為我們還年輕,沒有像工作或家庭這樣的責任束縛我們在一個地方,所以在有機會的時候旅行似乎是首要考慮。我認為我們大多數人都知道,如果現在不去做,將來就再也沒有機會了。
語法分析
現在進行時: 「我的大多數同僚都專注於」使用現在進行時態,強調同齡人當前的興趣點,體現了句子的時效性和活躍性。 完成時: 「還沒有承擔太多的責任」這個表達使用了現在完成時態,說明他們目前還沒有承擔太多責任,強調了他們的生活狀態是一種持續到現在的情況。 條件句: 「如果我們現在不去做,我們將永遠沒有機會」使用條件句來表達對未來機會的考慮,增加了句子的邏輯性和複雜度。
高分詞匯
  • peers
    同行者
  • focued
    專注
  • exploring new cultures
    探索新文化
  • responsibility
    責任
  • tie us to one place
    綁定我們在一個地方
  • priority
    優先順序
  • aware
    意識到