7 分範例

問題: Do people need to have goals?

思路 1

Yes, they do
是的,他們確實這麼做。
考官答案
Definitely. If we don't have goals, we lack direction and purpose. I believe everyone has goals, even if they don't know it. For some, it's about work, and for others, it's about family. But I think everyone has goals, whether they know it or not. We need something to aim for, or else we don't grow as individuals.
當然。如果沒有目標,我們就缺乏方向和目的。我相信每個人都有目標,即使他們不知道。對一些人來說,這是關於工作,對其他人來說,這是關於家庭。但是我認為每個人都有目標,不管他們是否知道。我們需要有些東西來努力,否則我們無法在個人成長。
Absolutely. Without goals, we don’t really have a direction or purpose. I think everyone sets themselves goals whether they realize it or not. For some, it may be at work, while for others it may be for family but I think everyone sets them, consciously or not. We need something to work towards, otherwise we aren’t growing as a person.
沒錯。沒有目標,我們就沒有方向或目的。我認為每個人設定自己的目標,無論他們是否意識到。對於一些人來說,這可能是工作,對於其他人來說,這可能是為家庭,但我認為每個人都會設置目標,無論他們是否有意識。我們需要為之努力的東西,否則我們就無法成為一個更好的人。
語法分析
沒有目標,我們實際上沒有方向或目的。 每個人都設立了自己的目標。 作為一個人,我們沒有成長。
高分詞匯
  • goals
    目標
  • direction
    方向
  • purpose
    目的
  • set themselves goals
    設定自己的目標
  • realize
    了解
  • consciously or not
    無論有意識與否

思路 2

No, not necessarily
不,不一定。
考官答案
No, I believe goals can distract us and create too much pressure. Life is so fast now that our goals might prevent us from noticing opportunities right in front of us. We focus too much on them. We should be more flexible and open to chances that come, so we can be spontaneous and respond to things happening around us.
不,我相信目標可能會分散我們的注意力,並帶來太大的壓力。現在生活節奏如此快速,我們的目標可能會讓我們忽略眼前的機會。我們過於專注於這些目標。我們應該更加靈活,開放接受來臨的機會,這樣我們就可以隨機應變,回應周遭發生的事情。
No, I think goals distract people and put them under unnecessary pressure. Life moves so fast these days that the goals we set for ourselves can stop us from seeing opportunities in front of us, as that’s all we focus on. We need to be open to opportunities that come our way in a more flexible way so that we can be spontaneous and react to what happens around us.
不,我認為目標會讓人分心,並給自己帶來不必要的壓力。現今的生活節奏非常快,我們為自己設定的目標可能會阻礙我們看到眼前的機會,因為我們只專注於目標。我們需要更靈活地接受來自我們路上的機會,這樣我們才能隨機應變,並對周遭發生的事情做出反應。
語法分析
條件句: "that the goals we set for ourselves can stop us" 這個條件句說明了設定目標可能帶來的負面影響,增加了句子的邏輯性和複雜度。 現在進行時: "Life moves so fast" 使用現在進行時態強調了生活的快速變化,體現了語言的時效性和活躍性。 被動語態: "be open to opportunities" 這個表達用被動語態,強調對機會的接受態度,而不是誰在創造這些機會,展示了句子結構的複雜性。
高分詞匯
  • distract
    分散注意力
  • under unnecessary pressure
    不必要的壓力
  • set for
    設定完成
  • opportunities
    機會
  • focus
    專注
  • flexible
    靈活
  • spontaneous
    自發性
  • react
    反應