7 分範例

問題: What goals should a society have?

思路 1

Economic Development
經濟發展
考官答案
I think it's really important to balance between rich people and poor people. The money made by a society should be shared fairly among everyone. If not, there will be problems later on. People need to feel they are part of society's growth, or else they might feel left out.
我認為在富人和窮人之間保持平衡非常重要。社會賺來的錢應該公平地分享給每個人。否則,以後會出現問題。人們需要感受到他們是社會成長的一部分,否則他們可能感到被忽略。
I suppose the most important thing is to make sure that there is a balance between the haves and the have-nots. The wealth that a society creates needs to be fairly distributed amongst the people otherwise problems occur further down the line. People need to feel that they are part of the growth of a society as without that, they feel disenfranchised.
我想最重要的是要確保富人和窮人之間有平衡。社會所創造的財富需要公平分配給人們,否則問題將在未來出現。人們需要感覺自己是社會增長的一部分,否則他們會感到被剝奪權利。
語法分析
被動語態: "needs to be fairly distributed" 這句話中使用了被動語態,說明財富分配是被動地發生的,展示了語言的複雜性。 條件句: "otherwise problems occur" 使用條件句來表達如果不公平分配財富,將會導致問題的結果,顯示了邏輯思維和句子結構的複雜性。 現在完成時: "have been disenfranchised" 這個表達使用了現在完成時態,表示一種從過去持續到現在的狀態,體現了語法的準確性和複雜性。
高分詞匯
  • the haves and the have-nots
    富有者和貧困者
  • wealth
    財富
  • fairly distributed
    公平分配
  • otherwise
    否則
  • disenfranchised
    被剝奪選舉權

思路 2

Social Welfare
社會福利
考官答案
Nowadays, healthcare is a big thing that people care about, so having healthcare for everyone is an important goal. With technology getting better quickly, medical care is also improving, and people know this. They want to get help when they need it. As the population in many countries is aging, more countries are trying to find ways to provide healthcare to all.
現在,醫療保健是人們關心的一個重要議題,因此讓每個人都能得到醫療保健是一個重要目標。隨著科技的迅速進步,醫療保健也在不斷提升,人們對此有所了解。他們希望在需要時能得到幫助。隨著許多國家人口的老化,越來越多的國家正努力尋找方法為所有人提供醫療保健。
In today’s world, healthcare seems to be one of the biggest factors that people are thinking about so universal access to healthcare is a major goal. As technology is developing so fast, so is medical care and the people are very aware of this, and they want to be able to get help when they need it. I think as the population of many countries starts to get older, more countries are looking at ways to do this.
在今天的世界中,醫療保健似乎是人們最關心的因素之一,因此普遍享有醫療保健是一個主要目標。隨著科技發展如此迅速,醫療保健也在進步,人們對此非常了解,他們希望在需要時能得到幫助。我認為隨著許多國家的人口開始老化,越來越多的國家正尋找實珅的方法。
語法分析
現在進行時:「正在發展」和「正在改善」這兩個表達使用了現在進行時態,說明技術和醫療保健的改進是一個正在進行的過程,展示了語言的活躍性和時效性。 從句:「隨著許多國家的人口開始變老」使用了從句來提供原因或背景,說明為什麼更多的國家正在考慮這個問題,增加了句子的複雜性。 被動語態:「能夠獲得幫助」使用了被動語態,強調人們希望能得到幫助,而非誰來提供幫助,展示了句子結構的複雜性和語言的準確性。
高分詞匯
  • healthcare
    醫療保健
  • factor
    因素
  • universal access
    普遍存取
  • major goal
    主要目標
  • medical care
    醫療護理
  • aware
    意識到