7 分範例

問題: What activities do primary children often do in your country?

思路 1

School-Related Activities
學校相關活動
考官答案
School sports are very important here. After school, many children practice their sports, and on weekends, they have competitions. Football, for example, is becoming more popular. On Sundays, in the parks, you can see lots of children's football matches with teams from many places.
學校運動在這裡非常重要。放學後,許多孩子會練習他們的運動,週末則舉行比賽。例如,足球越來越受歡迎。在週日,在公園裡,你可以看到許多地方的孩子足球隊參加比賽。
Well, school sports are taken quite seriously here so, after school, a lot of children train in whatever sport they are doing, and then at weekends they compete. For example, football is growing in popularity and on Sundays in the parks, there are numerous children’s matches being played by different teams from all over the region.
學校體育在這裡受到很重視,所以放學後,許多孩子都在進行他們所參加的運動訓練,然後在週末進行比賽。例如,足球越來越受歡迎,週日在公園裡,有許多來自整個地區的不同球隊的兒童比賽。
語法分析
現在進行時:"are taken" 和 "are doing" 使用現在進行時,表示一種正在進行或習慣性的動作,展示了流暢和自然的口語表達。 過去分詞作定語:"being played" 使用過去分詞作定語,說明比賽正在進行,這種結構使句子更加豐富和具體。 介詞片語:"from all over the region" 這個介詞片語作為定語,用來修飾前面的名詞“teams”,表明這些隊伍來自不同的地區,增加了句子的信息量和描述的細緻程度。
高分詞匯
  • are taken quite seriously
    被認真看待
  • train
    訓練
  • compete
    競爭
  • growing in popularity
    越來越受歡迎
  • numerous
    眾多

思路 2

Outdoor Activities
戶外活動
考官答案
Many young children do activities outside. On weekends, they go to parks with their families and play in playgrounds or play team sports like football and basketball. Recently, basketball has become very popular. You can see many coaches and young kids practicing for games on the basketball courts.
許多年輕孩子在戶外活動。週末他們和家人去公園,玩樂園或是進行團隊運動,像是足球和籃球。近來籃球變得非常流行。你可以看到很多教練和年輕孩子在籃球場上為比賽練習。
A lot of primary kids do outdoor activities. On the weekends, they are in the parks with their families playing in the playgrounds or participating in team sports like football or basketball. Basketball has exploded in popularity recently and the basketball courts are full of coaches with groups of primary-age children practicing for matches.
很多小學生會參加戶外活動。周末他們和家人在公園裡玩耍或參加團隊運動,像是足球或籃球。籃球最近在受到熱烈歡迎,籃球場滿滿都是教練帶著一群小學生練習比賽。
語法分析
過去分詞作定語:"playing in the playgrounds" 和 "participating in team sports" 使用過去分詞作為定語,描繪孩子們的活動,使句子更加生動和具體。 現在完成時:"has exploded" 使用現在完成時表明籃球的流行是一個最近發生並且持續到現在的現象,展示了對時態的恰當運用。 現在進行時:"are full of" 表示籃球場目前的狀態,使用進行時表達持續進行的活動,增加了句子的動態感。
高分詞匯
  • outdoor activities
    戶外活動
  • playground
    遊樂場
  • exploded in popularity
    爆發了巨大的人氣
  • primary-age children
    小學生
  • practicing for matches
    練習比賽