7 分範例

問題: Why do some people dislike teamwork?

思路 1

Individuality
個人特質
考官答案
I believe it's because individuals like to work alone. Perhaps they think they can do the task better than others and don't trust their colleagues with it. As a result, they often have more work and probably more stress than their teammates.
我認為這是因為個人喜歡獨自工作。也許他們認為自己能比其他人做得更好,並不信任同事。因此,他們通常會比隊友有更多的工作,也許更多的壓力。
I think it's because people prefer to go it alone. Maybe they believe that they can do the job better than their colleagues and don't trust them to complete whatever task they have to do. This means that they end up with far more work to do than the rest of the team, and probably a lot more stress too.
我認為這是因為人們更喜歡獨自做事。也許他們認為自己比同事做得更好,不相信他們能完成任務。這意味著他們最終會比團隊其他成員有更多工作要做,可能也會承受更多壓力。
語法分析
「也许他们相信他们可以做得更好」的條件句表達了一種可能性,展現了答案的複雜性和邏輯性。 「他們最終會有更多工作」使用現在簡單時態表達了一種常規的、持續發生的情況,反映了語言的準確性。 「比他們的同事更好」和「更多工作」使用比較級形式,增加了答案的細節和深度,體現了更高的語言能力。
高分詞匯
  • go it alone
    單打獨鬥
  • colleagues
    同事们
  • end up
    最終

思路 2

Efficiency
效率
考官答案
Some people think team work is not efficient. They believe that teams often need a lot of meetings to plan work and making decisions can take a long time. This can take up a lot of time and some feel it's better to use this time to actually do the work. That's why they prefer to work alone instead of in a team.
有些人認為團隊合作效率不高。他們認為團隊常常需要很多會議來規劃工作,且做決定可能需要很長一段時間。這可能會佔用很多時間,有些人覺得最好是利用這段時間實際做工作。這就是為什麼他們更喜歡單獨工作而不是在團隊中工作。
Some see working in a team as inefficient. By this, I mean that teams need to meet regularly to discuss plans for a job and decision making can sometimes take quite a while. These can be time-consuming and some people feel that this time could have been better spent just getting on with the job. That’s why some people just prefer to avoid working in a team.
有些人認為團隊合作效率低下。我的意思是,團隊需要定期開會討論工作計畫,而做出決定有時可能需要花費相當長的時間。這可能很耗時,有些人認為這段時間本來可以更好地用來直接處理工作。這就是為什麼有些人寧願避免在團隊中工作。
語法分析
現在分詞短語作主語補足語:"teams need to meet regularly to discuss plans" 中的 "to discuss plans" 是現在分詞短語作用於 "meet",增強了句子的連貫性和邏輯性。 條件句:"some people feel that this time could have been better spent" 使用條件句型,展現了假設和推斷,增加了答案的深度。 比較級:"better spent just getting on with the job" 中的 "better" 使用比較級,表達了效率的對比,增加了答案的複雜性。
高分詞匯
  • inefficient
    效率低下
  • decision making
    決策
  • take quite a while
    需要相當長的時間
  • time-consuming
    耗時
  • getting on with
    專注於