购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is slightly wordy and has some grammar issues. Keep responses natural and concise (maximum 4–5 sentences). Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct small grammar points (e.g., "which are necessity things" → "which are necessary"; "Besides them" → "Besides that").

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially for clothes and makeup. However, I don't like buying necessary items like school supplies because it's more of a chore. I also shop for art supplies for my hobbies, which I find enjoyable and relaxing.

建議: Good intent and relevant reason, but the response is informal, repetitive and contains hesitations and grammar errors. Use more neutral language, avoid slang ("you're not rich"), remove fillers ("umm"), and organize ideas with linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Provide one clear reason and a brief example.

範例: Yes, I usually compare prices because I want to get the best value for my money. For example, I check online reviews and different stores before buying electronics to avoid overpaying or buying poor-quality items.

建議: The answer is somewhat confusing and contains unclear sentences and grammar mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence, then explain with one or two specific details. Use linking words ("however", "for example") and correct sentence structure (e.g., "I find it hard to decide about important purchases because they affect my life.").

範例: I sometimes find it difficult to make choices, especially for important purchases because they have long-term consequences. However, for hobby-related items I decide more quickly because I research options and know what I need.

建議: You answer the question directly and give a reason, but the explanation is slightly general and contains grammar issues. Use clearer phrasing and a specific example to support your opinion. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" and avoid awkward phrases ("at this economy").

範例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better because price doesn't always reflect quality. For example, I compare smartphone reviews and sometimes mid-range models offer similar performance to expensive ones after reading user feedback.

× Yes, I do like shopping in general.

✓ Yes, I do like shopping in general.

No grammatical error; sentence is correct. (Kept for completeness.)

× Although I don't enjoy shopping for school supplies which are necessity things, I prefer shopping for the things I personally like such as clothes and makeup.

✓ Although I don't enjoy shopping for school supplies, which are necessary items, I prefer shopping for things I personally like, such as clothes and makeup.

The phrase 'necessity things' is incorrect: 'necessary' is the correct adjective and 'items' or 'things' should be used, with commas to set off the nonrestrictive clause. Suggest using 'necessary items' and adding a comma before 'which' and another before 'such as' for clarity.

× Besides them, I also like to shop for my hobbies such as art supplies.

✓ Besides that, I also like to shop for my hobbies, such as art supplies.

Using 'them' is vague because prior noun phrase was general; 'that' (or 'these') refers back to the idea of shopping for personal things. Also add a comma before 'such as' to introduce the example.

× I do compare prices.

✓ I do compare prices.

Sentence is grammatically correct present simple emphasis; no change needed.

× If you're not rich and you can't afford everything in life, you always have to compare prices since at this economy there are a lot of examples of getting scammed and umm, you can pay for things that aren't worth much more, they make you pay more.

✓ If you're not rich and you can't afford everything in life, you always have to compare prices, because in this economy there are many cases of people getting scammed; you can end up paying much more for things that aren't worth it.

Multiple issues: 'since' is acceptable but 'because' is clearer here; 'at this economy' is incorrect preposition and collocation—use 'in this economy.' 'a lot of examples of getting scammed' is awkward; use 'many cases of people getting scammed.' The clause 'you can pay for things that aren't worth much more, they make you pay more' is run-on and ungrammatical; separate ideas and use 'end up paying much more for things that aren't worth it.' Use semicolon or conjunction to fix run-on sentence.

× It is kind of difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I can't decide on a lot of stuff.

✓ It is kind of difficult for me to make choices when I shop because I can't decide on a lot of things.

'Stuff' is informal but acceptable; 'things' is slightly more appropriate in exam context. No tense issue; kept present simple. Suggest replacing 'stuff' with 'things' for formality and clarity.

× Stuff in my life, especially important stuff very easily since it affects my life.

✓ I find it especially difficult to decide about important things in my life, because those decisions affect me greatly.

Original is a sentence fragment and confused structure. It lacks a clear verb and subject alignment. Rewriting provides a subject ('I'), verb ('find it...difficult'), and clarifies meaning. Avoid repeating 'life' and reorder for clarity.

× But it depends on the subject.

✓ But it depends on the subject.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable as a short response; no correction needed.

× Like for example my hobbies, I'm a more quick decider inside research beforehand.

✓ For example, when it comes to my hobbies, I'm a quicker decision-maker because I do research beforehand.

'Like for example' is redundant; use 'for example.' 'More quick' is nonstandard; use 'quicker.' 'Decider' is not the usual noun in this context—use 'decision-maker.' 'Inside research beforehand' is incorrect phrasing; use 'because I do research beforehand.' The corrected sentence fixes adverb/adjective choice and word order.

× I definitely disagree with this one because as I said before, the cases of overcharging are increasing every day at this economy and with Internet getting scamming has also increased so you have to research.

✓ I definitely disagree with this because, as I said before, cases of overcharging are increasing every day in this economy, and with the growth of the Internet, scams have also increased, so you have to do research.

Several issues: 'this one' is acceptable but 'this' is more natural. 'The cases of overcharging' -> 'cases of overcharging.' 'At this economy' -> 'in this economy' (preposition error). 'with Internet getting scamming has also increased' is ungrammatical; restructure to 'with the growth of the Internet, scams have also increased.' Add commas for clarity and use 'do research' or 'research' as a verb phrase.