购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more fluent and natural: avoid filler words (uh, um), correct vocabulary (displayed not displaced), and produce a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Keep within 3–4 sentences and make meaning precise (e.g. explain why window displays appeal to you).

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I like strolling through different streets and looking at window displays because they show new trends and give me ideas for outfits. Sometimes seeing new products makes me feel excited about upcoming events or changes in my life.

建議: Improve grammar and reduce repetition: use correct verb forms and countable/uncountable nouns (compare prices; it helps). Add a linking word to organize reasons (for example, ‘because’ or ‘so’), and give a brief specific example to strengthen the answer.

範例: Yes, I always compare prices between several shops because it helps me save money while getting the same quality. For example, when I bought headphones last month I checked three stores and found the best deal, which saved me about 20%.

建議: Clarify and complete your answer: avoid vague phrases (child looking?) and finish sentences. Use linking words (for example, ‘so’ or ‘therefore’) and give a short specific method you use (check reviews, compare specs). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I often find it hard to choose because many products look similar at first glance. Therefore, I usually do online research, read customer reviews and compare specifications before I go to the store so I can make a confident decision.

建議: Use clearer reasoning and correct grammar: avoid awkward phrases (selling expensive products are expensive), use linking words (however, because), and support your opinion with a specific example (e.g. brand premium vs. mid-range product performance). Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

範例: I don't think expensive products are always better. Although luxury brands charge more for their name and design, a mid-range product can offer similar or better performance for a lower price — for instance, some affordable smartphones outperform flagship models in battery life.

× I just like to uh, go through different streets and see the new goods, uh, being displaced in the window.

✓ I just like, uh, to go through different streets and see the new goods being displayed in the window.

The phrase 'being displaced' is incorrect: 'displaced' means moved out of place. The intended meaning is 'displayed' (shown for sale). 'Being displayed' is the correct present participle passive form. Also adjust word order to 'like, uh, to go' for naturalness. (Grammar problem type ID: 10)

× Uh, feels like there are lot to expect in my life.

✓ Uh, it feels like there is a lot to look forward to in my life.

Missing subject 'it' is needed for the impersonal 'feels like' construction, and 'lot' should be 'a lot' (singular quantifier) so use 'there is'. Also 'to expect' is unnatural; use 'to look forward to'. (Grammar problem type ID: 1)

× Yes, definitely I will compare price among multiple shops when I am doing my shopping.

✓ Yes, definitely I compare prices among multiple shops when I shop.

Mixing 'will' with a habitual action is unnatural. Use simple present for routines. 'Price' should be plural 'prices' when comparing multiple items or shops. Also 'when I am doing my shopping' can be simplified to 'when I shop'. (Grammar problem type ID: 4)

× It is because it can really helps me to save money and uh uh, you can purchase a good as a relatively low price uh, with the same quality.

✓ It is because it can really help me save money and, uh, you can purchase a good at a relatively low price with the same quality.

After modal 'can' use base verb 'help' not 'helps'. 'Purchase a good at a relatively low price' is the correct preposition ('at' not 'as') and 'save money' typically omits 'to'. Also remove duplicate filler and streamline word order. (Grammar problem type ID: 10)

× Uh yes it is very difficult for me to make choices because there are just so many goods and they all look similar and without the child looking you cannot tell like which one is better.

✓ Uh yes, it is very difficult for me to make choices because there are just so many goods and they all look similar, and without careful looking you cannot tell which one is better.

'child looking' seems to be a mistaken phrase; likely intended 'careful looking' or 'careful inspection'. Also 'you cannot tell like which one is better' should be 'you cannot tell which one is better' — remove filler 'like'. Add commas and 'careful' as adjective modifying 'looking'. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× Umm. In that case I usually do some online research before I go shopping so I.

✓ In that case, I usually do some online research before I go shopping.

The original ends abruptly with an unfinished clause 'so I.' Remove the incomplete fragment. Add a comma after 'In that case' and keep the sentence complete and concise. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× Well, to be honest, I don't think so. Selling expensive products are expensive because of their advanced values.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't think so. Expensive products are expensive because of their perceived value.

'Selling expensive products are expensive' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use subject 'Expensive products are' and 'perceived value' is a clearer phrase than 'advanced values'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'products are'. (Grammar problem type ID: 2)

× Like all the luxury products, they are basically expensive for its big name.

✓ Like all luxury products, they are basically expensive because of their big brand name.

'Its' is singular but refers to plural 'products' so use 'their'. 'Big name' is better expressed as 'big brand name'. Also remove the definite article before 'luxury products' for naturalness. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× Uh, in terms of the quality, they will probably not as good as the other umm.

✓ Uh, in terms of quality, they will probably not be as good as the others.

Missing auxiliary 'be' in the comparison 'not be as good as'. 'The quality' should be 'quality' (no article). 'The other' should be 'the others' to refer to other products. Include 'be' to form the comparative structure correctly. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)