购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (yes/no + brief reason), then add one supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid redundancy. For example, replace “I am not really like shopping” with “I don't really like shopping,” and remove awkward phrases like “for some time.”

範例: I don't really like shopping because I'm not a materialistic person. I usually just look around and only buy things when I genuinely need them, such as a replacement or an essential item.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with one or two coherent reasons using linking words (because, so, for example). Correct word choice and concise phrasing will improve clarity (e.g., “Sometimes” not “For somehow”). Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

範例: Yes, I often compare prices because there are many options and I want to get good value. For example, I check reviews and prices online to choose the best-quality product at the lowest cost.

建議: Answer directly and then give a clear reason with improved grammar and linking words. Use singular/plural correctly and natural phrasing (e.g., “types of goods,” “when I shop,” “which one has better quality”). Keep it to two or three sentences.

範例: Yes, it can be difficult for me to choose when I shop because there are so many types of products. I usually compare features and prices to decide which item has better quality or offers the best value.

建議: State your opinion clearly and support it with a reason and an example. Use correct grammar and natural expressions (e.g., “I don't think expensive products are always better” and “a cheaper product can sometimes be higher quality”). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “not with for me.”

範例: No, I don't think expensive products are always better because price doesn't always reflect quality. For instance, I once bought a mid‑priced phone that worked better and lasted longer than a more expensive model.

× I am not really like shopping.

✓ I don't really like shopping.

Used present continuous 'am not like' incorrectly. For general preferences use simple present with do/does: 'I don't really like'. Replace 'am not' + verb with 'do not' + base verb. Grammar Problem Type ID:6

× I think I'm not a high demand person and for some time I have just like go to take a look about the goods and I will stand spend the money if it is very necessary.

✓ I think I'm not a demanding person and sometimes I just go to take a look at the goods and I will spend money only if it is really necessary.

Multiple errors: 'high demand person' should be 'demanding person' (adjective use). 'for some time' intended meaning 'sometimes'. 'have just like go' is incorrect verb construction; use simple present 'I just go'. 'take a look about' should be 'take a look at'. 'I will stand spend the money' unclear; use 'I will spend money only if...'. Also 'very necessary' -> 'really necessary'. These corrections use appropriate adjective forms and simple present for habits. Grammar Problem Type ID:13

× For somehow I will compare the price when I shop and this is because there are lots of choice I can make but sometimes I need to save money and I would compare the price to pick the best quality and the cheapest price.

✓ Sometimes I compare prices when I shop because there are many choices I can make, but if I need to save money I compare prices to pick the best quality at the cheapest price.

'For somehow' is incorrect; use 'Sometimes'. 'compare the price' -> 'compare prices' (plural). 'lots of choice' -> 'many choices' (plural and quantifier). Use 'to pick the best quality at the cheapest price' for correct preposition and parallel structure. Grammar Problem Type ID:11

× It is difficult for me to make choice when I shop.

✓ It is difficult for me to make choices when I shop.

Count noun 'choice' needs plural 'choices' when speaking generally. Use plural to match 'many' or general context. Grammar Problem Type ID:1

× This is because there are many type of the goods when I shopping and I need to take a look which one is better and which one having the better quality or having the cheaper price.

✓ This is because there are many types of goods when I shop and I need to see which one is better and which one has better quality or a cheaper price.

Use plural 'types' and 'goods' without 'the'. 'When I shopping' should be 'when I shop' (simple present). 'take a look which one is better' -> 'see which one is better'. Use 'has better quality' and 'a cheaper price' for correct verb and article usage. Grammar Problem Type ID:13

× I don't think its specific products are always better than the cheap hot one.

✓ I don't think specific products are always better than cheaper ones.

'its' is incorrect possessive here; omit it. 'the cheap hot one' is unclear and ungrammatical; use 'cheaper ones' for comparison. Keep plural for general statements. Grammar Problem Type ID:12

× This is because cheaper one may having better quality.

✓ This is because a cheaper one may have better quality.

'may having' is incorrect; use modal + base verb: 'may have'. Add article 'a' before 'cheaper one'. Grammar Problem Type ID:8},{

× In contrast, the expensive product may may not having a better quality and I need to spend more money to buy the expensive one.

✓ In contrast, the expensive product may not have better quality, and I would need to spend more money to buy it.

Double 'may may' is redundant. Use 'may not have' (modal + base verb). Avoid repetition 'the expensive one' -> 'it' or combine. Use 'would need' or 'need' depending on nuance; 'would need' fits hypothetical. Grammar Problem Type ID:8

× It is not with for me I think.

✓ I don't think it's worth it for me.

'not with for me' is incorrect phrasing. The correct expression is 'not worth it' meaning not a good use of money. Reorder to natural English: 'I don't think it's worth it for me.' Grammar Problem Type ID:11}]}