购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like shopping, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and concise wording. Avoid unclear phrases like "buying you clothes" or repeated words.

範例: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I like buying clothes and small items because choosing new things makes me feel happy and relaxed.

建議: Answer directly and give a clear reason. Use a complete sentence to explain why you compare prices (e.g., to save money). Avoid asking questions to the examiner or fragmentary speech. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I compare prices because I want to save money. For example, I often check different stores online so I can find the best deal.

建議: Respond to the actual question about decision-making. State whether you find it difficult, then give one specific reason or example. Keep sentences short and relevant, and use linking words like "because" or "so" to explain.

範例: Sometimes it is difficult to choose, especially when there are many similar options. For instance, I struggle to pick between different brands of snacks because they all look good.

建議: Give a clear opinion and support it with a brief, specific reason or example. Use correct word order ("are not always") and avoid hedging phrases like "I don't know." Use linking words such as "because" and "for example."

範例: No, expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones because price does not always reflect quality. For example, I once bought an affordable phone that worked better than a pricier model.

× Yes, I am because I like buying you clothes or products that that makes me happy.

✓ Yes, I do, because I like buying clothes or products that make me happy.

The student used the wrong auxiliary 'am' for liking an activity; the correct auxiliary for habits is 'do' (third person not required because speaker is first person). They also used the pronoun 'you' incorrectly; it should be omitted unless addressing the examiner as the recipient. Additionally, 'that that makes' duplicates 'that' and has incorrect verb agreement: use 'that make' to match the plural noun 'clothes or products'. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I do' for habits and ensure subject-verb agreement with 'make' for plural nouns.

× Yes, I do, because I. Are you a very poor people person? A very poor, poor person? And I compare prices when I in the shop.

✓ Yes, I do, because I am a very careful person and I compare prices when I am in the shop.

The original contains fragmented sentences and incorrect phrases. 'Because I.' is a fragment. 'Are you a very poor people person?' is wrong form and likely meant 'a very careful person' or 'a very price-conscious person'; 'people' is misused. 'I compare prices when I in the shop' misses the verb 'am' after 'I'. Suggestion: combine fragments into one coherent sentence, choose correct noun ('person') and include the verb 'am' for present continuous location 'in the shop'.

× I especially like eat bread to produce and crisps. Actually by.

✓ I especially like to eat bread, fruit and crisps.

The sentence has incorrect verb form 'like eat' instead of 'like to eat' or 'like eating'. 'to produce' is likely a mis-speech for 'fruit' or 'produce'; 'Actually by.' is an incomplete fragment. Suggestion: use correct verb pattern 'like to eat' or 'like eating' and choose the correct noun 'fruit' or 'produce'; remove fragments.

× I think expensive products not always are better than cheaper because I don't know, I think so.

✓ I think expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones because, I don't know, I just think so.

Word order and article usage are incorrect: move 'not' after the auxiliary 'are' to form 'are not'. Also 'cheaper' needs a noun reference; use 'cheaper ones'. Suggestion: say 'are not always better than cheaper ones' and include a small discourse phrase 'I don't know' separated by commas.